Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Nathaniel West


#106

More specularity on the car maybe? I do like it as it is, but I don’t fully get the cars material. Just a thought… :shrug:


#107

Hi Nathaniel,

Some things I would mention, reviewing your image:

You have established so much light I´m wondering why the background part is so dark - there are also some very dark surfaces of the buildings in the foreground. Maybe there could be overall some more ambient/sourrounding or do you call it diffuse light that affects the environment.

much lightning also indicates a lot of activity (people are not sleeping) - maybe there could be more traffic in the air to give consideration to all the light.
If you would add some more little docking or parking zones in the background it would increase the sense of scale.

just my two cents.:slight_smile:

best regards
Fahrija


#108

Hi there! It came out very good, as I expected… Tehniqually without any crit and very grand. I wish u all the best at the voting! :thumbsup:


#109

Great job Nathaniel. My girlfriend had suggested something like this as a potential concept. Glad someone did it! GL in the finals.


#110

Thanks so much for the comments and thanks Fahrija for the critique. I wanted to keep that structure in the back pretty dark just to give it an ominous feel. It’s getting a little of that glowing light on the bottom, but maybe some more would help. Anyways, thank you for your insight.

Good luck everyone!! I wish you all the best!


#111

Hi, I have already said of what I thought of your image, she is formidable of realisme, what I am going to say is stupid on behalf of one challengers but I would like that you win so that you made us a tutorial on the creation of the windows of buildings, I find this exceptionel work of detail, the luminosity is extremly returned well, good luck for the first phase of vote but I think that you have too many concerns has to make for you


#112

Thanks MDN67, your support throughout this whole process has been much appreciated, and I wish the best to you!! Your image came out very nice, and you’ve come a long way since the beginning. Good luck!!


#113

thanks for all Nathaniel


#114

No problem tolga! You definitely deserve to be judged, and I didn’t want you to miss it after all that hard work. Good luck to you!!


#115

dude, hey hey dude …rgmrgrknn dude, hey nice pic

:slight_smile: I like that town , especially the windows , all is peace
after a night out in the opera … yes ?

good work


#116

Squibbit, you’re right–they’ve been out to the opera–a little double meaning for the Grand Space Opera theme. Good call on you part. And your image turned out awesome by the way. Thanks for the kind words.


#117

Wow I just spotted this in the final image thread…This is so Blade Runner/Fifth Element…I love this SORRY I missed the process…Great stuff :applause: Good luck.


#118

Thanks Element 5!


#119

Great work Nathaniel, I really like your work! Could be a scene from Blade Runner 2 :wink:

Btw, I also checked your homepage. Lots of interesting stuff there :slight_smile:


#120

Dude!!! I been lookin at your work and u so gonna be in the top 15 in the next one,
this was just unlucky! :thumbsup:


#121

Exaaaaactly! Awesome job:thumbsup:

Tom


#122

Congratulations to all of the winners! You really did do an awesome job. I’m looking forward to the next challenge, and I hope to place next time around. Thank you for all of the support guys!!! Oh, and for critiques sake…would anyone be interested in telling me what was lacking from this piece? I’m interested in knowing what didn’t hit the mark with this one. Thanks again everyone!!

Nathaniel


#123

Well its pretty obvious what you didnt have in the pic. Theres no luck in it!
Bad Luck!
Some voters prefer other kind of stuff…

You, Atmospheria, SideAche, GregPro and Nuro had all very impressive layout.

All of you placed more importancy to the area designs. Which seems to delude the voters it seems?
But they all ignored something up front. Something to catch the voter. Something which gives you guys luck boost!

No worries. Remember that when you achieve your greatest ever artwork. You might be the only one liking it. :wise:

until next time!


#124

Great Stuff Nathaniel, I loved your work. See you in the next one.


#125

Hi nathaniel,

I agree to Falcor - don´t doubt in quality of your image you´ve created. It had a big chance to get an honorable mention. In my opinion especially in the 2D section it was very tough voting this time and I´m absolutley sure a number of images were just a stone´s throw away from honorable mention.

Within such narrow decisions it really needs a bit luck.

with best regards
fahrija