Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Jesus Conde

#17

I much prefer this concept… the fact that the girls perpose is now clear (she has to interlock the piece into the hole, to do something to save her species - probably blow up the city or whatever).

I agree about the removal (or replacement) of the jumping girl… one idea is to have a few others of the hero species running toward the front of the pane, getting trampled by the front line of the alien species… if there are only 3 or 4 of your species left it is unlikely that you’d fight… although they are obviously trying to fend back the alien hawd so that the hero character can plant the piece thingy.

Anyway, a vast improvement upon the first - a little development of the secondary characters and you’ll be well on ya way.

#18

I agree with stevetwist, this concept is much better, it “works”, all is now clear and you`re telling a story through the image. Keep this way :thumbsup:

#19

Jesus, (I’ll speak english for respect to the world, I’ll change that if you want) it looks very good, and having seen what you did in your first post it has great potential!
I like the ideas of your last sketch: the “key”, the idea of encajar the key in its fitting place, and also I like that she is not alone now, the two warriors are a good choice
I’ll keep an eye here to see how do you make your alien design and how does everything develop… and doing a 2d and 3d entry…that’s cool, if you finish both you’ll be my new hero :smiley: , keep it up!

#20

Wooo, I’d love to see some of the ships or the city in the background

#21

little change

#22

this is the idea but im thnking in change it becuse looks to much like predator jajajaja, ok the thing is, it dosent have to looks like a animal and it have to be very much like a human , becuse that means that it can think and build stuff. buey guys see you later im very tired. have fuuun

#23

The small change to the concept is a BIG improvement. The warrior now running with the lead as opposed to jumping to certain death is far more believable.

As for the alien concept… don’t worry that you think it looks like something else, unfortunately we all get inspired by things, especially movies, and often the inspiration goes too far (I did one concept that, without realising, was a complete copy of on movie’s big ending). So just take a step back, have a good think, and I’m sure the idea will come to you.

Good luck in finding a cool alien concept, and I look forward to seeing it when you do.

#24

this is another concept for the alien, im still thinking about how is got to be.

#25

this is a new concept for the aliens

im so danm busy, guys see you later i will take some hours to see your work, but i cant doit no, im finishing my semester.

have fun everybody
and good luck

#26

wip of the alien concept

#27

Ha! No sabía que también tenías un thread aqui en 2-D… Mucha suerte! Me gustan esos dibujos de los aliens! Sigue asi! :thumbsup:

#28

wonderful drawings. Nice point of view in the concept drawings.

#29

this is how is going the line art but im gonna start whit the colors right now, and im gonna be doing the lines in the coloring procees.

#30

Looks interseting. :slight_smile: THere is a good connection between the fore, middle, and background. Looking forward to more updates!

#31

sorry but i dont know if i have much time to finish this challenge ill do my best, what im going to do is print the imagen in a good resolution and finish it whit a pencil and markers, so then im gonna scan it and start puting those colors on it, so see ya later and good luck for everybody, and jeje i still have to finish the 3D image jajaja man :eek: :bounce:

#32

I like how your sketches have evolved. My only comment is about the girl on the left. I think she should have more emotion to her. More afraid or maybe a vengeance look. After all aliens are grabbing her legs. Love the characters :slight_smile:

#33

hi everybody, i finish the line art yesterday and some final touches this morning.phewwww maybe i have some time to see some works of you today, well guys see ya later and remember to have fun whit this images.

#34

that’s a great image yuo got there, dude.

hey I got a suggestion to you: since you’re in the 3D area too ,
why not put a link to your threads in your signature like I have ?

#35

The line art looks great - keep up the good work.

#36

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