Hey there! I could do with some opinions on this if you’ve got a minute!
I’ve been really putting off work on the main ship and thought I’d try something a little more drastic. I removed the second of the close ships because it really didn’t add anything to the pic and was a little lost.
So that got me thinking about making the main ship look about to launch, then after my girlfriend said the image was technically good but lacking the drama that so many of the other entries had, I thought about doing something drastic. Like the ship launching from underground and shooting out of the launch tube like a bullet! A very very massive bullet!
So this is a rough idea of how it might look. I lowered the overall value of the image so that the brightest spot, and hence the focus, will be the thick beams of pure light. I’m in two minds as to take this path, but I like the idea of bringing some of the power and drama of the earlier sketches.
I’d really appreciate some feedback on this!