More details and structure on the big space ship.
A lot of thing on the top of the ship missing, and the artillery.
Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Alexandre TUIS
Riddick
#21
Tranchefeux
#22
Hi, all my encouragement for your GSO, I waits to see the continuation
of your project the ship is well detailed and a little “Giger” I
like its design. Good road.
Riddick
#23
I advance quite easy on this project.
But I hope to finish it in time.
Thank you Tranchefeux for the hugs!
bolchover
#24
hi, quite nice, defintely a lot of giger influence here 
nought wrong with that. I think the image would benefit, if the idea is to convey motion of central ships, to black out (top left corner) those little vessels. Just a thought…
francis001
#25
Hi Alexandre
Great ship designs. I think some other people have made similar comments, but have you tried getting more of a sense of space in your composition? There is very little negative space between the elements of your painting. If the ships were smaller, or your canvas was bigger, I think it would feel a bit more “open.” You could also try overlapping your ships and objects a bit more, so there is a sense of behind/in front of, in particular the two largest ships.
Good work, keep it up!
KevinJM
#26
Where the hell did you get the idea and inspiration for the design of the spaceship? It is really good.I like it a lot. As for critics i would say the same thing as Francis Tsai.Anyway keep up the good work man.Keep updating,wanna see more:buttrock:
BlueEyeLizard
#27
Great ships I like the cool colors that were used on them. It also would be nice to see some warm colors on them to. Kinda like the light was being reflected from the explosions.
Good Luck!
Riddick
#28
bolchover< Yep good idea!! Thank you.
francis001< Well, you have always the eye to see wich is good or not!
I will make few changes to have a better idea of unlimitedness.
I have spent recently a lot of time on other project!
I have 2 weeks now to finish it!!!
dean080580< Well, no inspiration in Hell, but in my head and in the form of few motorcycles.
BlueEyeLizard< The explosions will be certainly the final step!
Thank you for the comments.
Riddick
#29
Well a little update!
I have a lot of things to change now.
The configuration of the spaceships, create more things.
And finish the planet.
I love this idea of iron planet. You don’t really know if it is a gigantic spaceship or a planet.
And it looks a little like the Dark Seid planet and I like this kind of design.
Even if I am certainly going to develop it.
Riddick
#30
Oups, here the uncompressed version!
Well a little update!
I have a lot of things to change now.
The configuration of the spaceships, create more things.
And finish the planet.
I love this idea of iron planet. You don’t really know if it is a gigantic spaceship or a planet.
And it looks a little like the Dark Seid planet and I like this kind of design.
Even if I am certainly going to develop it.
Falcorr
#31
Interesting how hard it was for me to do the spot the difference test.
But now it is so obvious im ashamed:shrug:
Anyway planet is cool addition makes things click in my opinion.
Isnt it hard to do black space with nothing and trying to deliver cool picture?
I tried it also, but you know the results.
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