Hello!
I’m looking for a little feedback on the composition of this peace, please? It’s still a rough sketch, but something feels off.
Think of it as an illustration, maybe for a children’s book 
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I’m thinking of letting him hold a tube of toothpaste with his right hand instead of keeping it down like that.
Just from the get go; I do tend to scrap my art before I finish it.
I’m just trying to get back into my hobby and taking it a little bit more seriously again. No aspirations to illustrate any more books or anything, but I want to be able to enjoy finishing my art again. That has been a while.