Hi there casual viewer and experience critic.
This is my first work post online for review so please be gentle; still I welcome constructive critique and suggestion to further improve my work. Lets begin shall we
This is my first character that I created. Her name is Zepyhna. She is the goddess of blades hence the title. The idea behind her creation is that her base design is sort of from Abrahamic religion (Christian, Islam and Judaism). I fully aware that is Abrahamic religion has no goddess or deity but they do have angels; so I sort of use element like wings, halo, cross and etc; something that gives out the "divine" look and feel. However this is a fantasy character, therefore I mixed in other variety of element to make it "interesting" because it'll be boring if I kept on using wings and crosses all the way.
As a goddess of blades, she is not a goddess of smith and craft NOR she is a swordmaster. She is primarily a dancer hence the word blade dancer. She summon and control any regular or legendary sword within the area or poof it into existence from thin air. She does not forge a sword but inspired one by designing the shape, figure out the material needed , way to forge it and magic spells if required; then insert the full schematics into mind of the smith who will be destine to forge. Therefore I design her to wear less of metal and armor-like and more of cloth and dancer for "easier" maneuverability
Thanks you for your time and please help me make this character work.
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