Girls on beach (illustration)

#21

hey Julien!

this is really great work. you actually got me fooled at first glance. i like the new updates, espesially the hands on the front girl.

-r

#22

Wow, fantastic piece!

The render is supperb and you’ve made a great work witj modeling too, congrats.

Alan

#23

Thank you Alan, but I want to clear from the beginning and is wrote in the first message. I used Poser6 and Vicky3 model imported in Cinema 4D. I didn’t model the girls bodies exept some body deformations and injection (uisng Poser). I know that a lot of people here don’t like the use of Poser, but I hope you can critizise this work on a good use of poser. Th rest als textures is made with Photoshop, BodyPaint and render, compo light ect with Cinema4D.

In any case I’m very happy about all feed backs and crits that you made to me. Slowly I will up-date and publish next images.

Julien

#24

Looking very, very good, Julien!

I think you can work even more on the elbow joints, especially on the girl on the left. If you compare her very rounded elbow with the sharper and more natural looking elbow on the girl on the right there’s a clear difference. Try to bring hers up to par with the right one and it will lift the image even more :slight_smile:

/anders

#25

mmm you have reason… I forgotted this details. I was too much concentrated to the hand poses… Ty Anders :wink:

Here is the work on the second scene.
I’ve change the pose of the girl at right and up-dated all textures on figures.

Scene 2 - update 1

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if you want to look the first version click here

at soon with a new scene and up-dates…

jdd

#26

This is great stuff!

#27

To take a small pause on the last 2 scene body pose and elbows problems I continue to go forward with the work. Here I post one of the new scene the I made.
Scene 3

Postwork in PSD

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jdd

#28

Really great work Julien!! - you have achieved the photographic look both in terms of the posing, lighting and final postwork touches very, very well!

The first image definitely could fool the eye, although elements of the second give the CG away - as noted by someone else, the inside of that hand, as well as the specularity on it make it look very plastic to my eyes immediately - it looks like it just nneds some tweaking - maybe make it less flat, more bent fingers!?

Brilliant work in every other respect though mate!

Adam

#29

Heila Adam,
ty so much for your comment. Yep, the second one need some minor works to reach a better satisfaction… :wip: … sooner als possible I will post other scene or up-dates ones… depending on ho I will progress…

#30

Hey man… that change of style for you… I think the result is more than convaincing… we now it’s CG but if not, certainly difficult to say it’s not a modified photos… great :thumbsup:

The better result is of course for the first…
…the only odd thing in the second is the hand in the background blue… certainly not so ard to fix with the pose…
…and for the third, the top of the woman at left make so much static an unreal.

… but in any case, I’m really impressed… good work Juju… congratulations :beer: and courage for the next steps of this pleasant work.

#31

The first one looks great, a bunch of girls talking together at the beach - a classic!

Like someone already said, it really has that photo look to it.

#32

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