girl portrait study, Daniel Galanty (3d)


#1

Title: girl portrait study

Name: Daniel Galanty

www.artstation.com/artwork/erl3P


#2

The jacket and scarf are fantastic.

The only things that bother me about this portrait:

  1. The brownish red of the lips makes them look a bit dead

  2. The bump mapping on the forehead is a bit strong - it attracts attention away from her face and makes he look like she has skin problems

Otherwise, beautifully modeled. Well done.


#3

looking good


#4

Thank you !


#5

Thank you for critique :slight_smile:


#6

Thanks for posting Daniel! Featured. If you get time would loveto get your help with some of the noobs on the forum:)

Cheers*