Beautiful work, the drapery is exceptional. my crit would be that the lightest highlight part needs to be moved to behid her as it is in the original painting. This will contrast great with the darker drapery. Also if you want to make the painting look like reality then i would add some more displacment to the floor, because to me it looks realy flat. but if you are teying to imitate the flat floor of the painting then it is fine.
overall very well done!
Good piece.I love the atmosphere
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it looks like a photo… great texturing… awsome lighting… is that hgri lighting… or vray…
Model seemingly is quite good,
Bumps & Texture should be enhanced, as they look a bit flat
Lightning is quite OK, but should be improved in relation to the original work.
Ummm…sorry about this - I far prefer the CG version of this picture to the original oil painting - so full five stars to you!!! * * * * *
For starters, as you crafted and created the arches in 3D you were able to position them in exactly the correct alignment - as the original builder would have done. While it’s only slight, the painter unfortunately didn’t quite get his spacing right for the last arch, so the perspective there looks odd. The colouring and texturing you’ve added to the walls, as well as perfect lighting to compliment are fabulous. I would agree that perhaps a little more work needs to be done to the cobbled floor. It is just a little too regular.
Just a thought - consider how old these arches are, how much wear and tear they have seen over the years - possibly hundreds of years - now translate that into how many people have walked a path between the arches. The grooves, pits and possibly missing cobbles that would have occurred…
A wonderful set piece to try and copy - and you’ve more that succeeded. Well done.
:applause:
