Game Art Comp 8: Shredder - TMNT

#41

shorten the feet and hands… please! Its really putting me off it! Nice texture work, and a good look, but those freakish fingers and feet stand out for me…

#42

Thanks :slight_smile:

haha I’ll see what I can do about those freakish hands and feet

… I know they are a little long, but for some reason I like it that way. I mean teh hands are maybe only an inch too long… and same thing with the feet. The boots are bigger than the actual foot. Ahh hell maybe I’ll name him Donkey Shredder.

I really wish I had time to fiddle around with it and go back, unfortunately I’m going away this weekend and won’t be able to work on it. With any luck I’ll be able to get on a friends computer to post the final images.

#43

Looking pretty good, but I think it could use a bit more punch. Try exaggerating the size of his armour a smidgen. I think the helmet seems a bit too small - or rather, too close to his head, like it’s .5mm sheet metal right up against his head. It should be big enough to fit some padding and straps and so on under there.

I think it would also look better if it flared out a touch more at the bottom, and if the blade-thing at the top was much bigger. I remember from the old TMNT days that thing went all the way around his head, and behind it, sticking out the back about 4 inches.

Also, exaggerate the size of his greaves and braces, and the blades on them. Make him more mean looking!

Textures are looking good, if a bit plain - I’m a little confused by what’s going on with his face, around the eyes.

#44

Hrmm I wish I had time to go back and use all of these suggestions, but unfortunately I’m away from my pc this weekend and just waiting to post what I had done from a few days ago in the final submission thread. Next competition I’ll take my time making sure the model is as good as it can be before moving on to texturing etc. Thanks again everyone, I can’t wait to see all the final submissions.

#45

Here’s my final stuff. Thanks for all the help everyone.

Reference :

Wires :

Posed :

Textures :

Diffuse

Normal

Final Render :

#46

With the help of War Destroyer I figured out how to throw this model online.

You can view it here

#47

Very Nice work…

One thing ( small ) I would maybe give his hands a slight (grasp like) form… so they are not so straight…

Just my 2 cents

gr8 work though:):smiley:

#48

thank you, If I had more time for the competition I would have changed alot of things around. Towards the end I barely had any time to work on it… oh well, there always next competition. I had alot of fun and learned so much :slight_smile:

#49

Congrats on your entry in the contest! I loved the idea with the blister pack!

#50

Thanks! Next time I’ll better :smiley:

#51

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