fresh guy with mapping

#1

hi !everybody .this is my frist time here and my frist matte painting .although i learn drawing for a long time ,matte painting to me is a brand new…experience.
my problem is …my mapping,i feel strange …unreal? but ,i do not konw what and where to do the next.
thanks so much for any suggestions
an apologize for my english ,and my english teacher,she always saied draw nothing on your book

if you can’t see
here is the picture
http://mgpcbw.blu.livefilestore.com/y1paNIbtFkxZu3x44j_CUwNd_NO0UHXOaawwJdRYX4tqEsYE3d2MtW4jOGy-GlCX6mlaYDChfx1mUKCSITA2ZexLKOKUh60s8XL/mapping1.jpg
can someone see the picture now?i have change the location of the picture :frowning:

#2

http://service.photo.sina.com.cn/or…d4feb80ab63&690
here is the picture

403 forbidden… (can’t see the image)

#3

en^^ and now ?i have change it to windows live

#4

Good start. Might want to put up a larger version, a little on the small size this one. A little fuzzy on the edges and the foreground grass isn’t helping the scene. The background looks a little too detached, i’d try to add more buildings or cityscape on the far cliff too… Also the vantage point with respects to the far mountain looks wrong, i’d imagine the mountain to much higher up. Think about adding in more vegitation perhaps, around the buildings, maybe overgrown slightly.

Dave

#5

i’m very glad to save your suggests and thanks for your help :slight_smile:
the perspective is hard to control and lighting …
i have seen your matte painting in some where before,but i just see those images and i didn’t know who made the such amazing things! i’m really really exciting!great job!

#6

An interesting concept. I wouldn’t let my kids play there though. :scream:

#7

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