i thought this was a well written piece, if a little bit on the short side. i guess it is more like a vignette than a story proper, but you have a good eye for the camera, and where to be to get your message across.
the environments and shading seemed underdeveloped, and the animation felt on the verge of pantomime, but there was enough activity in your storyline to keep things going.
one thing that coulda been a nice touch would be some pupil dilation when young guy looks up at gate crashing down.
sure is an impatient little fella. which brings me to my one big question: if the gate falls down on top of him, wouldn’t that take him back to old age instead of younger still? that part confused me a little bit, but it’s a minor gripe. did anyone else notice this?
anyhow, nice work, and a good portfolio piece.