Fiat 124 Special

#101

Hey thanks Lemog, uhmm I like what you say but don’t understand how can I model less clean and right, I’m sticking to the reference for proportions and such and trying to have the poly count low, do you mean, everything it’s too straight and well organized? maybe I could “shake things up”? like rotate windows a bit, some vertex upper than others, not 0º and 90º lines?

#102

New test with the lighting, fixed the “greeness” on the windows and a little test on the beach wall, a wall filled with graffitti, which I get from photographs here on my town, comments are more than welcome, it would be great to know if you like this graffitti here or not.

#103

Green building is too dirty atm… takes too much focus.

Either its because the contrast of the grime is too great, or because the size of the dirt blobs are too great. Maybe even a combination of the two…

Wall with grafitti looks great though…

But the water still looks a bit meh…

#104

Thanks for the comment man, well yeah you are right I will tone down that contrast and clean the texture, thanks for the comment on the graffitti wall great you like it, what do you think it’s wrong with water?

#105

No probs with graffitis… it’s perfect… like much. :thumbsup:

About the green building… that make much as smoke than parts with dust, dirty pieces,

and for the water, that seem to perfect and uniforme… a bit too “plastic”…

that need foam and I think it’s not enough transparent… that make someting too much green-blue, and reflection are too low… some little white parts must be visible… more constrats…

#106

Maybe more eay like that, I’ve photoshoped your image to explain what I see more about the building and the water…

If that can help :wise:

#107

Thanks so much for your comments man, thanks for the constructivist opinionm I agree about all the points you had named, will work them all and keep going, when I have the time, I’m more than eager to follow this scene.

#108

WOOOOWWW man, thanks a lot for this reply, when I saw it I got myself saying “WHEN DID I MADE THIS?” it was pretty impressive and shocking, even if it’s fast “sketched” it looks greeaaat, well thanks so much for that man, I really appreciate this and will have a consideration on how it will be the work from now on, I don’t like too much the texturing right now on my scene so I’m going to clean a little more, but at least it helped me to learn some more about the UVunwrap thing cause I was pretty basic on it now it’s more conscious, really man and I say it again, THANKS, THANKS and THANKS, by the way I’m even considering now to work some more with post processing on Photoshop, so don’t get stuck trying to do things that will be unproductive or “bad looking” on 3d.

#109

Hey guys just a little test with the water shader and some post processing (thanks Lemog), I hadn’t have time to model more but as soon as I have an update I’ll let you know.

#110

It’s really better for the building…

bette also for the water, but it’s again very “plastical” but that comes… maybe that will be better to setup properly the water when all parts will be in the scene, not ?
and of course… you will add in post processing the foam…

#111

Hey guys, after a long time off, I’m just happily working again on this scene, I will take the most of some free days I have to try to get it done, the modeling and detailing on the new building (grey one) it’s almost done, just texturing missing and beginning with the pink one, comments, questions, suggests will be welcome.

#112

Great to see you another time here… I hope you will have enough free time to go further with your project.

The new building appear already very good… that could give you much motivation to continue with a good speed :thumbsup:

#113

Thanks a lot Lemog, the great Lemog always encouraging, well I’d love to work on this by now, but I’m going on holidays trip for two days and then I’ll be like on another trip for a week or so, when I arrive home I’ll nail this one fast, I want it I WANT IT haha, thanks for the comment man, appreciate it, merry christmas for your and for yours cheers.

#114

Well… again more patience…

I wish you to have good rest time in your holidays… after all that, you will have more force and motivation to finish this image !

while waiting… merry christmas…and especially happy christmas party :beer:

#115

Hey that’s right man, well I’m back from the first trip and will work today on the scene before leaving tomorrow on a trip again, Merry christmas man, cheeeerrrsss.

#116

Hey guys, happy new year to all of you, I just got back from holidays and will work on the scene hardly to get it done, by the way here’s an update, the grey/yellow building it’s done just need some texturing tweaks, I updated the water too would be great to hear your comments about it, thanks.

#117

Hi carandia,

This look really great. May be the image is too sharp that hurt a little bit the eyes but otherwise really good !

Cu,
Jeff

#118

Thanks Jeff, well yeah maybe I overpass the sharp usage haha, thanks for pointing it out, it’s good to hear that from someone that’s not me.

#119

I dont like the water, it doesn’t seem very beach like, but the lighting looks great can’t wait to see it finished

#120

Thanks for the sincerity man and it’s great you like the lighting, thanks for the motivation, it would be great if you could be more specific about the water issue why do you think it looks no beach like, thank you man.