Feel free to crit my site.....pretty please....


#1

Well on top of everything else a brotha is tryn’ to do, I managed to get my site up and running. I tried to keep the site simple and I still have to optimize the graphics and all, but thats about it. Please check it out and let me know if you all are feeln’ it or not. Thanks:D

http://www.kannonball.com/sir-g


#2

Well I like the look of the site, has that old movie look or whatever its called, been trying to think of a good site to make like that myself. I cant hear the music now because im at school but it probly doesnt make much a difference. There is one thing though, and thats the full screen mode, it makes me want to…STAB YOU IN THE FACE!

seriously, just get rid of the full screen and your site will be good.


#3

original…urban feel …I think it came out hot…:thumbsup:


#4

Well since full-screen mode dosen’t seem popular anymore, I ditched it.:beer:


#5

straight out of left field GeneralChaos. funny! By the way, the music DOES make that much more difference.

Yo 3rdDimension, really nice stuff all around. Check out some of my stuff. www.shahadi.com

Let em know, Da Boogie Down Baby!


#6

I like it…:cool:
You might want to put a title on all of your websites and the different links you have it just dosn’t look to good when it says “Untitled Document”. As for that I think the site came real nice. I like your mask navigation, but I’ll admit it was a little hard finding some of the links to your stuff. I like the music you had on the E4 joint(especially the FF X), but for some reason I could not go all the way into the site( I clicked the link, and it goes to a blank section of the site.) So did you just graduate from school? I’ll admit it’s type hard right now tryn’ to find work in these times. You can check out this spot here for different types of jobs here in the city(NY).Click Me!!!

Peace!!!


#7

Oh yeah and I’m glad you are feeln’ the music. I ripped it of the album “Joe Beats” from the dj of the same name. The album is tight and if you like the track I have on my site, then you’ll like the album!


#8

nice site my man. excelent work. btw… you responcible for battleseed? MAD RESPECT. i’ve been trying to motivate myself for years to make a cartoon like that… but i’m just too lazy.


#9

Thanks man… the truth is though it was hell working on that series doing the animation by myself. I guess it was tough because of the deadlines and the fact that I was doing this all for the first time. But in the end I look back on it all and am thankful for the experience I gained. Sometime I always say to myself if doing this flash animation for a series was tough, I could imagine doing a 3d animated series:D . During the time I worked on it, we looked at alot of anime and videogames for reference. And I spent many of nights trying to break down the techiques used in the anime that help bring the animations to life. Things like moving the backgrounds and shaking the screen to simulate camera movements. If the company handen’t went under(damn you BASTARDS!!!) we were going to implement more 3d and lots of particle effects(like the ones in any capcom fighting game) when we would have finally gotten to the fight sequences. My friend LeSean who was the Illustrator and creator of the series is currently working for Dreamwave comic studios and just completed work on Arkanium and are now working on a comic book adaption of a well known 80’s cartoon that was just redone for television and can be seen now on saturday mornings. I say if you have an idea, go for it because Flash allows anyone with a good idea and knowledge of the program to bring their ideas to life and make it presentable to the public or anyone intrested in making a show out of it!:thumbsup:


#10

I don’t know about anyone else, but I hate waiting for a page to load unless I know how long I have to sit here!!! maybe some percentage loaded counters (I think that’s what they are called)… good stuff besides that


#11

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