I’m with frameless about pose and lighting.
The hiding (2nd) is a better theme for this character.
Btw, the pose needs to be stronger i think.
The lighting in picture 4 would be nice for that pose.
Also i can suggest another theme if you don’t mind =)
The Fauna was drinking water from the river in front of the big tree.
Suddenly she heard a noise coming from her left side.
While she was bringing her left hand with full of water to her mouth, she wide opened her eyes with fear and looked the way where the sound came from.
Keep up the good work!




