Here is a way to get inspiration. Make this painting an experiment. Go in with a totaly different approach. Build everything up with masses then ad details with no (or very little) linework. Consider it an adventure…
Try steps like these:
1)start with a dead colour (50% gray tonal value) can be brown,sienna, burnt umber, or gray, gray blue (for a cooler pallete), gray gerren, gray red…you get the idea.
2)using a 80% gray tonal value create an envelope with several sub envelopes, to establish basic form and structure. You can use minimal line here!
3) build up all your dark areas by moving about the painting and massing in your darkest areas to create form.
4)then add your lighter medium grays and large light areas. blend where you need too…
5)go ahead and move about the painting some more (do not concentrate in one area) and establsih medium details…rework any areas that have become too muddy.
6)checking your lights and darks, tighten your masses some more…
7) go ahead and add details.
8)fiished!!!
I think you should give this method a try. find inspiration in the process and use your allready posted landscape as reference…
hope this helps…
shaun
p.s. i will post a pdf on my website and show you how a famous contemporary realist (david a leffel) uses this approach with great success. give me about 1 hour.