Eve (contains nudity)

#1

This is a personal project using zbrush, maya and hair plugin thundercloud. I want to cause tenderness, beauty and sensuality. Any advice or suggestions are welcome and I will be very grateful that you take the time for it.





#2

Mmm really not sure of your face. body look ok, but definitly not her face.

What’s your reference?

#3

Thank you very much for your time, i’ll be uploading all my reference images. And do you think my previous version is better? or you think the sculpt of the face is the problem?




thanks again for your time

#4

No the head still doesnt look right. Share your current version in a Front / Side / 3/4 view orthographic

#5

#6

Still you didn’t share your references… can’t help achieve your goal without it

#7

Great work! Skin and hair are very good. Maybe tone down the masculinity in her face (unless, of course, that’s what you’re going for) and the torso can do with a bit more anatomical detail (I like the breasts). The colour reflections on the skin, I like as do I the water and general lighting. Keep at it! This could be really spectacular!

Regards,
Giom

#8

Hi there,

Here i did an overpaint (liquify actualy) to illustrate some changes that may help to give her a more femenine look.

Basicaly making everything rounder… smoother. Generaly speaking, when portraying idealized woman nothing can be a straight line or hard angle. Thin neck and narrow shoulders help too.

Hope that helps.

Btw the shaders, textures and rendering are lloking very nice. :thumbsup:

Note: i think you are referencing a young brooke shields. Some time ago i tried to make a caricature of her and proved to be an extremely difficult subject because even if she is beautiful, she has some masculine lines (eye brows and jaw line) that are looking ok in real word but for some reason are harder to recreate without making her look manly

#9

Exactly the face I was thinking of. If so, the likeness is definitely there.

#10

Thank you thanks for comments and your time Giom, JM-art, WyattHarris exactly JM-art (She was exactly who wanted to use!!) but I dont found the same reference in different points of the same age, so i assumed a little :smiley:

I’ll be making adjustments you suggest me and and I’ll post

thanks

#11

That happened to me also in a model (also of an actress) that i’m working. Later i found that i could have made some print screens of a movie…maybe for another project!

keep the good work!

#12

I think her body texture is way to splotchy

#13

References pictures are the keys. Even me use ref form screen capture movie.

For my Harry Potter, I also bought random movies of him juste because he has more a clean cut in My Son Jack.

Don’t hesitate to investigate IMDB to find out movies for ref. References search is a very important step that people always over look.