eroded book: motorbike


#1

ello guys,

another image from the eroded book.

created with

Cinema 4d XL 6, Photoshop 7 and Nikon Coolpix 3100


#2

As usual, it’s really great. I think it might look a little better if you took down the “erosion” by like 5%, as it seems a touch strong. Especially in the upper part, it looks like the the main image and the erosion image(s) are both about 50%. Also, I feel like I’m missing some small details on the front of the bike (given the minimalism of your work, there may be nothing there, but I feel like I’m missing something that I shouldn’t be due to the erosion).

I really want to see some grander story start to come out of all these images. Do you have the entire series of images available?

Cheers,
Josh


#3

ello, thanks man :slight_smile:

its not online at the moment, but will be on September the 30th.

i agree it does need more detail at the front and the erosion turned down a bit :slight_smile:


#4

re done it a bit


#5

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