Eon (Trailer) Entry: Bilogortsev Dmytro


#1

Bilogortsev Dmytro is entered in the “Eon Challenge” update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Finished Trailer: Done… Maybe I am Happy


#2

EON trailer
Style and logo


#3

Nice start! wondering how the “plasma” effect has been created…particles?
Good luck and welcome to the challenge! :slight_smile:

ThE-ShiFT team


#4

On this stage, this is only Photoshop :slight_smile:
Plug-in KPT FlaxFlame, motion blur, brightnes/contrast adjustment and layer blending mode adjustment.
In movie, It maybe particles but in After FX. Or Maya’s particles but adding color and glow in afterFX…


#5

Yeah, very exciting first image. Welcome to the challenge and good luck!


#6

As though all. Only seems that the phrase of "the stone yielded a secret that made even Earth’s survival pale into insignificance
" is too long for a title. Are there ideas how to shorten it, but that sense remained?


#7

Thank you fifty3dragons, I think that continuation will follow necessarily!


#8

Here is few modification frases:
“… The secret of the Stone overwhelms Earth’s futile survival strugle …”
“… The Stone’s secret marches over Earth’s strugle for survival …”
Hope these help you out :slight_smile:

Since you have only so much time left, I think you should really push for the clarity of the storyboard -> one glimpse sees the story.
You found the story nicely, keep pushing to the finnishline! :thumbsup:


#9

Thank you for advice, Cofiction!

When little time remains, a brain works more productively, isn’t it? :slight_smile:
I love approaching of deadline :thumbsup:


#10

This is firs part of my soundtrack.
Any comments?

Play Video >>


#11

Nice intro. For me the rhythm felt just slightly off right at the beginning, either the space between the repeating heartbeat/knocking sound (i.e. maybe the space needs to be removed?) or the point where the electric guitar enters (i.e. it feels like it maybe comes in too early; maybe push it back another beat or two?). Otherwise I thought it sounded rpetty good. Nice build to it.


#12

There where emptiness, voice of Patricia will sound…
Thank you very much for comments!
An Updated version will be at the evening.


#13

I hope no changes anymore.
Part 01


#14

And part 02


#15

Part 03


#16

Hey, nice job on the edited boards. I like how it’s been expanded with some action shots, especially around the beginning. It’ll be interesting to see it put into an animatic along with your soundtrack.


#17

Some correction, some voice. But…
I have some problems with final? more dynamic part…
I think it’s time to rest :slight_smile:

Play Video >>


#18

Models for some war scenes… Texturing will be later.


#19

Thanx!
I try to work quicker!
Deadline visits me in my nightmares :slight_smile:


#20

That’s a great animatic. I think it’sl coming together quite nicely. At first I thought it stopped rather abruptly, but then I saw that it only covers the first half of your storyboards. It’s a great start though. Hope you find the time this week to finish it up. Keep at it! :slight_smile: