Eon (Illustration) Entry: MAURICIO ALVARADO KLADT


#92

Whooohaaa,wow that really gotta be hard if you’re living on the otherside of town and you’re out of fuel,ha,ha.
Such a great pic!!Cpngratulations man!
MAybe try some blur in the forground to upgrade a bit more the dept feeling,whatte ya think?
Excellent work mate
:beer:


#93

I like thise disc cities very much, it makes a great backdrop for the scene and the little cargo ship in the front is a very good distraction and focus point, making it contrast sharply in the first images with the surroudings draws more attention to it as opposed to the later images where it seems to blend too much with the surroundings…

Just two comments for consideration:

  1. The central tube is too close to the lower city ‘horizon’ line… it fits TOO perfectly with the lower city buildings, perhaps a slight slant would set it appart and use it as a break or difition in the composition and not make it look too ‘parallel’.

  2. The three main vertical buildings with the antennae/spikes looks too alike… even though it might fit the ‘theme’ of the neighbourhood which is very likely and proper, it seems too much like rotated clones. I feel they need some striking detail that sets them apart some. This ‘clone’ effects works perfectly for the disc cities in the background but the foreground needs more distinction.

Just my personal observations that I think would make a great art work even greater :slight_smile:


#94

Thank you, I really apreciate your comments, I will thik about it.

regards.


#95

still adding elements, the structure inside the chamber, etc.


#96

more details.


#97

hey dude! wishing u and ur family a very merry christmas! :bounce: :love:
http://nwiz25.cgsociety.org/gallery/444492/

cheers! :beer:

> wowweeeeeeeee! :eek: :eek: awesome depth man! love the haze work! :love: each update is packed with details! :applause: good work mate! keep em comin! :thumbsup:


#98

From MEXICO CITY I wish you all a Merry Christmas and a Happy new 2007.

mauricio (ICHOMA)


#99

This is it.
My Final concept of Alexandria 2nd.Chamber) and its Bridge


#100

Ok this is it. My final image.

… ¨flat white concrete structures, resembling thick building foundations. Beyond the parkland, a narrow lake or river about a kilometer across ran east and west completely around the chamber.

The bridge pointed toward a city.

It could have been Los Angeles on a very clear day, or any other modern terrestrial city, except for the surreal exaggeration. It was bigger, more ambitious and ordered, more architecturally mature. And scattered throughout the city, like bumpers on a pinball board, were the biggest structures she had ever seen in her life. Easily four kilometers tall, they resembled upright chandeliers made of concrete, glass and shining steel. Each facet of the nearest chandelier-structure was as large as entire buildings in between. The chandelier resemblance increased as she looked up and saw them suspended from the chamber floor overhead. Across the two layers of atmosphere, fifty kilometers away, the city became beautifully unreal, like a model behind dusty glass in a museum… ¨


#101

Ok this is it. My final image.

… ¨flat white concrete structures, resembling thick building foundations. Beyond the parkland, a narrow lake or river about a kilometer across ran east and west completely around the chamber.

The bridge pointed toward a city.

It could have been Los Angeles on a very clear day, or any other modern terrestrial city, except for the surreal exaggeration. It was bigger, more ambitious and ordered, more architecturally mature. And scattered throughout the city, like bumpers on a pinball board, were the biggest structures she had ever seen in her life. Easily four kilometers tall, they resembled upright chandeliers made of concrete, glass and shining steel. Each facet of the nearest chandelier-structure was as large as entire buildings in between. The chandelier resemblance increased as she looked up and saw them suspended from the chamber floor overhead. Across the two layers of atmosphere, fifty kilometers away, the city became beautifully unreal, like a model behind dusty glass in a museum… ¨


#102

Some body can HELP ME!!
I am trying since the morning to upload my final image in FTP, and I think I did it, but when I push the refressh button it says that I have not up load nothing.

What can I do.???


#103

Don’t know if you’ve read my answer to your post, but Mibus has asked that anyone still having FTP upload problems e-mail him.

His post is the second to last on the FAQ thread :

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=4103272#post4103272

Hope this helps.


#104

I have just read the pos from Mobius, I also uploading my final image again, so I wil wait and then look for it, hope no fing inithing.

regards.


#105

i really enjoy your image…its fun to look at :slight_smile: lots of details to see!! keep up the good work!

-Eon Link-
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?postid=4109615


#106

Hi, Mauricio!

Has your problem with the final FTP upload been solved? I dearly hope it has…


#107

Vaya, es bueno encontrar otro mexicano por aqui, saluos y buena suerte


#108

im with Tiziano! … i hope ur FTP upload was successful … u worked really hard for it :frowning:

i wish u good luck my friend! god bless ya!


#109

Me gusta mucho tu imagen. Muy original :slight_smile: Buena suerte con la decisión final!:thumbsup:


#110

Thank you all for the comments.

also I wish good luck to everubody on the final judging.

Regards from ICHOMA


#111

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