i think im going to go for this as my composition,
still time to change my mind…
Ummmm… Really cool design, I like the “franco-belge” style of your scketch
But I noticed some perspective and anatomy errors on the female charachter that make her look a little bit flat… so I think you lost the dynamic of your interesting background depth … Keep it up, I am waiting for your next post !
cheers man, looking at it again the beams out. oops!
not totally sure what’s up with the girl though, hmm maybe her shoulder ?
the guys hair should be infront of the beam too
Maybe this will help you this is my suggestion to enhance depth an correct perspective. Waiting for your next post mate, keep it up
Hey Alwyn, sweet looking line art! I also really like your character sketch that you posted on the first page.
great start, a few minor tweaks on te details and you got down a solid base for a kick ass piece!
hope that sheet is of help
ready to take off, rock on! :buttrock:
bouboul/angel > cheers fellas! done some tweaks and things… but may well start from scratch soon anyhow !
mmbenya > thanks, im trying to come up with another composition where i can use that pose but having trouble…
breathtaking! just breathtaking! :eek:
m lost for more words dude …
cheers to u mate! n good luck as always!
Fresh Style Mister!!! U rock :buttrock:
nweiz25 > wow! thanks man, i was having a real crissis of confidence about this one, but you’ve just put me back on track
zweiDee > cheers dude! think im going to go with this idea now - but re work the composition, open it all up a bit more.
massive thanks guys!
looking good … best of luck.
thanks man, going to post some composition variations in a mo
Hey, nice comic book style there
thanks got to paint in to it alot more before i can drop the lines layer.
absolutely loving your entry man, superb!
Indeed really great comic&fresh style!!
Looking forward for how you’ll open it up(even as it already a nice compo i find) and the colors you are going to bring in!!!
Kind a movieposter feeling, keep m coming mate!!!
opening the whole thing up a bit, i think it works better … ?
the title is just a place holder for now … will come up with something cooler soon!
OKMER > cheers man
Excellent mate!!love it!
Maybe just that the left upper part of the pic seems a bit too bright to me,whatta you think?
OMKER > i think your on to something there, i’ll tone it down abit
btw, just checked your thread and nearly had a heart attack - superb mate!
( i LOVE detail!! )