Title: Environment: Factory
Name: Meny Hilsenrad
Country: Israel
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop
Hello everyone,
I recently finished this work. i used 3dmax and
photoshop for the texture and some postwork.
visit this link for more images and some sketches:
http://www.themeny.com/temp/factory/factory.htm
and here some credits:
Sketches and concept art by Sherban.
I want to thank Ruzz for it’s input and
his great feedback. also thanks to Ilan,
Oren and Yair.
another version:
The first version is so cool. Greatly modelled and textured, you also picked up a good lighting and depth. Great work!!! 
lovely feel
the chimney things with the red checkers really stand out though…
id look at moving them into the background a bit more
this is really nice work! I love everything about it-love the sense of scale. nicely done:thumbsup: i think you could use a slight DOF for the bkg though…but just knit picking here
Nice!!! I love the mood of this scene! Great modeling, great details, great lights
Congrats!
very fine detail. you really got what they call SPECIAL.
i wonder what if after render…
Lovely details. Something is bothering me about the colors in both scenes I really cant tell what it is. But render itself is gorgeous.
I like this piece… but I too feel that the red checkers stand out way to much. The overall feel of the scene is cold. An overwhelming amount of machines with little to no life. I would consider adding figures. In a place as vast as this, it is tough to take in the whole scope without some workers not riding around in loaders. Yet I guess that if you were trying to show a diminishing workforce due to machinery, then bravo. Hit the nail on the head.
Outstanding concept and execution. Very well acomplished sense of magnificence with sense of scale. However I think that more variation in color will benefit this image, I´m talking about some accesories, hoses, flanges, tubes… in different color than main structures. At first look, you can´t tell differences in material between parts. They look as the same material.
:applause: Nice work maan , liked the lighting very much n G8 modeling too…
P.O - * scene needs some texture variation ( may be of same colour but diffrent intenseity ) * change texture on the two tallest towers ( did’nt fit the mood of the scene) * N if you wanna go further - then try to improve the enviroment on the farest side ( may be you have to make the horizion more bright) …Anyways maan i realy like the lighting …love da work
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that’s exellent work! nice atmosphere, although i’m missing some smoke or dust somewhere.
thats pritty cool try makeing something for the grand space opera contest you have a great chance to suceed. love this model.
disgustingly sick with mad details!!! and I mean that in the most positive sense… really and truly inspiring work. Where might I ask did you find the patience to do such a detailed piece ?
I’m totally impressed !
:eek: :twisted:
WOW! man AWESOME!!!
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Thanks alot for the feedbacks!!
I really appreciate your comments and suggestions.
here’s a link for the making of:
