Enchanted Forest - Environment And Character - elfufu

#26

hey koryh your portfolio is just amazing… blew me away…i have to stop making web sites and do more illustrations…

#27

This is moving along great. I commend you for the really interesting viewpoint:) it’s never easy for me to break out of the norm. Cool lighting.

As far a critique, none really… but, I can only mention the type of problem areas I would struggle with if I was doing this piece. That would be…watch out for the proportions of the kid, it’s tough sometimes not to make them look like tiny adults. when you add in the radical perspective it makes even more difficult.

Sleepless

#28

hey sleepless, i know what you mean about that being the hard part, believe me its no coincidence that thats what im leaving for last…perspective is hard and the perspective i chose i think is even harder…thanks for the comments:beer:

#29

Hello!

Very nice picture you have there. Original and interesting. I have one comment on the composition. If you look at the attached picture you can see i’ve pointet out an imaginary line that draws too much attention. Suggest that you bend the arm of the candelcarrying goblin a bit. I think if you did something there, just a small adjustment, you will have a great picture.

Regards Knut

#30

hey I like your troll guys. Now I want to see a WIP in the 3d modelling section!

#31

“”""“RIPLEY…hey I like your troll guys. Now I want to see a WIP in the 3d modelling section!”"""

my 3D work is not very good. unfortunately! :thumbsdow however i am practicing that alot so i will post some soon. i just have to finish this 2D one first…

#32

well i thought by the weekend id be done but friends came from out of town so its been beer after beer for me this weekend.:beer: however i have managed to add some changes i figure im 96% done. not so sure about the victim… I have attached a

HIGH RESOLUTION VERSION IS HERE:
http://www.warproductions.com/trollsfull.jpg

i added a little shout out on the kids tshirt to the folks at CG channel for such a great site. you’ll probably need to view it on the higher rez version…:wavey:

#33

even though im not done if you wanna see how this illustration is being made so far click to view this short 400kb quicktime movie showing the process. its so-so quality…but hey 400k is smaller than most free porn vids

http://www.warproductions.com/trolls-making.mov

#34

Cool. why didn’t I think of that!
It’s so neat to see how people work and the process.
thanks for sharing

#35

uuuh this thread was getting spider webs, KORYH youre the first reply in like a week!! , i need to finish this thing already… so i can get replies again:annoyed:

#36

:bounce: !!! go elfufu !!! :bounce: !!! go elfufu !!! :bounce: !!! go elfufu !!! :bounce:

jeroentje :slight_smile:
(I’ll go nuts if I have to draw another leaf…)

#37

Elfufu, what a fantastic piece you’ve got here. Man I’m pissed that I’ve been missing all of the great work here. It seems to me that as far as artistic work and the quality of the pictures themselves this 2D stuff here is on a higher level than most of the 3D stuff. I really love your piece. It tells such a story without a word.

I guess I’m going to really kick a$$ on my 3D piece to get up to your artistic quality.

#38

ALMOST done i might add some things but i doubt it if anything i’ll do another drawing all together

#39

Done? But you have 4 more weeks! At least add some more definition to the main troll guy in the middle so he’s more of a focal point.

#40

yeah youre right i’ll work on it more. :slight_smile:

#41

Yes:bounce: If it’s done great, if not…great! Plenty of time to show us more. I think you handled a tough composition really well. I too am wondering when to stop.

Sleepless

#42

All I have to say is… fantastic:applause:

I love ya style,… it reminds me of some artist, but don´t no who
in the moment.
And i compare whit Kirt: A little bit more focus on the dominating
Troll… and where is the doggy???hehe!

Cheerz

Tommy Lee:beer:

#43

what do you guys mean with more focus on the center troll? i havent any clue what else to do. (maybe make him nude? nudity seems to attract you artisitic pervs :stuck_out_tongue: ) no but really and ideas would be appreciated. as far as the Dog is concerned i might draw one of the two dogs i have at home.

thers jedi the gay boston terrier
or

Jabba the Mutt, the fat snoring english bulldog… im undecided

#44

I was just commenting that he seems a bit unfinished or unrefined. Especially the left arm and hand. I’d tighten that up a bit and add a little more detail so he ‘pops’ from the page a bit. See the detail on the forground troll (the green one) for example. You really have good definition on his horns, eyes, and teeth. It just looks more finished this way.

Since the central troll is what I see first when looking at your image, I just think he should be as well defined and shouldn’t blend with the rest of the elements as much.

#45

Jeez, i gotta take more time to look over everyones stuff. Nice Style. I like where it’s going, or gone. Yup the 2D stuff is very inspiring creatively, the 3D stuff is inspiring technically. The feeling you’ve got going here is great. :thumbsup: