Enchanted forest - character - Cockofthewok

#5

Originally posted by Cockofthewok
what do yas think?

What I think is that it reminds me a bit too much to elfufu’s thing in the challenge.

jeroentje

#6

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUURRRGH! I just saw it. I guess there’s still something called origionality here. I’ll try to do better.

#7

I like the pose though, maybe he could be staring in a pool of water or something…

#8

I’m working on a new on as we speak. Mr. tree guard is leaping from a tree at YOU with axe brandished.

#9

Don’t get me wrong. I mean no harm.
jeroentje :beer:

#10

no, no, no. I mean at the viewer. please keep giving me crits. I’m still learning.

#11

You could reverse the angle and have your character jumping out of the tree down upon the unsuspecting victim. That could be equally dramatic.

#12

Here’s my idea (surprisingly similar to kirt’s yet I had yet to read it at the time). don’t love me judge me.

#13

This looks great now!

Waiting for a clean draft and color.

Keep on:applause:

Tommy Lee

#14

thats so funny that you had the same idea as my entry without seeing it. we think the same…lol:beer:

#15

cheers,indeed!:beer:

I’ll update a more finalized sketch ready to scan soon

#16

I like the chamelion style feet and tail you gave your dude in that last sketch. Those are definite improovements over the orriginals. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#17

Come on!!!

UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!

I’m looking forward to see your work!!!:wip:

#18

UPDATE IT MAN! I know what you mean about the food stamps.

#19

tee hee. Thanks for all of the feedback guys! sorry aout the long time with no updates. I was in vegas visiting my dad. Also, I’m enlisting in the army on June 16th. Hopefully I’ll be able to get pretty finished with this by then. here’s a small update. I’ll fix the hands gripping the axe soon. But please, feel free to critique the hell out of it.

#20

D’OH! I’m being a god damn post whore again! B.T.W. I’ve been studying the hell out of feng zhu, masamune shirow, and muira kentauro’s work just to name a few. I hope the knowlege will help me on this contest.

#21

It’s too late now, but I wanted to show a new design. what do you think?

#22

Nice job, but that shoulder guard looks a little to big. It sticks out to much, and the character is way to stiff. I guess it depends on the situation though, is he being knighted? Seeing as he’s hurt he should maybe be slouching a bit more.
Nice job. :thumbsup:

#23

Befor ya die, ya see elves…hehehe.

Great, but I agree with Gamoron.
Hope to see a finished one of ya at the end of the challenge.

GO,GO,GO Cockofthewok!!!:thumbsup:

Cheerz

Tommy Lee

#24

Looking good! :thumbsup:
Would love to see it finished. You still have 2 weeks.
jeroentje