05/18/2008- Final Image!!! GLTA… The more i work on it the crazier i become!
DWIV - 2D - ShogunWarrior - Beastmaster
Here I have combined A & E to get this type of creation of my beast for my beastmaster…
I will keep improving my beast until i feel he is ready…I really like it…
C & C welcome!
ersinerturk
#3
hi,
very good sketches! A and E are looking more dominant. Also A’s chest gives it a really strong pose imo.
GaeasHerald
#5
Strong concept, i really like it . IMO it looked it better when it stood over his knuckles in A.
Godd job.
Thank you guys for all the great comments. They are very helpfull and i will take them into consideration… Yes, i agree the creature would look better with its knuckles down on the floor. Let me see what i can come up with, taking a break now…I just finished my first sketch of beastmaster and will continue to sketch more later one, take care for now guys.
ShogunWarrior
#11
Peterbraeley, Ersinerturk, and Okmer- thanks the comments and suggestions on my beastmaster… Trying new things and adjusting to levels in complexity and design is hard to do… I will do my best and try do more sketches…In the meantime i will keep rendering more designs later on… take care everyone… gl and hf!!
system
#12
Hey man! Doing a good job! I’d really like to see some more experimentation with the main character, i dont see much developement between the two images you’ve done of him. With the beasts maybe you should step away from puzzleing parts together and let loose more, seems like you think, “one leg there, one arm there, oh and lets throw on the torso and head there”. Maybe try to be more loose and just do some nice shapes and see what becomes of it and not get to hung up on what exactly you are painting at the moment. if your thinking arm, arm, arm, your only gonna get a regular arm attached to its body. But if you instead just paint a formation raching from the center of the mass your painting it could still be worked into an arm or something else later, but here you’ll be more focused on a nice shape and not the figurative motiv you’re doing. Does that make sense? Behind most appealing images is an equaly appealing abstrakt composition I’d like to think. Some cool stuff anyway… Keep developing it!
-Niklas
Ferx
#13
Hey Peter,
Here you are mate!! Finally found your thread 
Really cool sketches, like a lot the “C” beast, really great design, I think that design have really potential for a demon lord Again, cool works!! Looking forward for more updates on your concept!! Cheers!! 
DerrickSong
#14
wao, your beast look powerful and strong, good job on it!!! Just i think you need to becareful with the anatomy on the arm, how the arm shoulder structure join with the body. Cant wait to see the beastmaster ridding on it!!!
ShogunWarrior
#15
Nicklas-Hi nicklas, thanks for the advice and I agree with you completely on the beast designs… I need to focus and create something totally different. I hope i can spend more time this week to do that.
Fernando- Hi man, its good to see you in this competition and im glad you are able to stop by to see some of my sketches, lol… Its not much but trying man.
Derrick- Hi, im very excited to compete in this competition, since it is my first dominance of war. I am glad you like my beasts but i feel its not enough yet. I will brain storm some more and get better ideas of what i want to see…Anyways can’t wait to see you complete your designs…
Everyone GLHF that is my saying for the day… In the end i know its gonna be an awsome war!!!
ShogunWarrior
#18
Maxter- thanks for the kind comment and suggestion on c… it seems everyone loves c… So ill spice it up a little and do a cyborg beast with some technical advances with the beast… I will add more sketches later this week with a final beast drawing…
martinnielson- Yes, i agree c seems to be the winner so i will do my best to make that beast a little better looking before my final drawing… I will post more sketches of my final later in a couple more days…
Keep the comments coming guys, need all the suggestions i can get, lol, thanks for looking…
ShogunWarrior
#19
Ok heres an updated on my Beastmaster. I am now working on my final sheet. Soon i will color in my beast and hope to finish on time. I have so much work its hard for me to do everything, lol… anyways c&c are always welcome take care for now.
