DWIV - 2D - mraaflaub - Cyclamen

#21

i would say 1 and 9 look interesting to me.

#22

I really like them all but for some reason I keep looking back at #1 for some reason. I also like #5. Great job.

#23

thanks guys…
but i`d like to read some more comments… :smiley:

#24

i’m an instant admirer of your nature man concept.
about upper bodies; 5 and 6 are better i think for they have longer heads that fit to your long nature creature i think.

#25

I like the “S” silhouette of the 3
the 1 and 9 are cool also. I like the spikes coming out of the body in no1
I like the headpiece in no5, it looks like more aggressive, like a carnivore plant

#26

I think No. 1 is the most interesting, followed by No. 11. Nice job so far.

#27

thank you very much for your support…
I mixed some shilouettes basically nr. 1 and 11. (thanks simon- they were also my favorites) but i think number 1 is too static for a character already stucked to the ground, therefore I tried to include the “S”- form from nr. 3 (good advise aelwine:thumbsup: )

#28

i think i`ll work with 12 14 15.
concepts are coming soon

#29

Hey man! I really like your idea and also the story behind it. I think you’ve taken it so far you should maybe develope some thumbs more into larger roughs, its hard to pick one of the latest batch becouse they are very similar and the details that set them apart are hard to make out. I really like what you have going right now, i’d like to see you take it to the next step until i can give some good feedback. Very nice work so far. Keep it up!

-Niklas

#30

14 would look nice,and I agree Frozzt about the sketches :thumbsup:

#31

cool concept and sketch man!~ i like the wing-like things as big as the ones on the #5 reply~
and i think the highlight in the newest five is the shreds/tatters~keep it up!

#32

hi guys thankks for the comments. i started with my first concepts. here the first one based on thumb nr.14. there are more to come

#33

Nice and original concept :applause:

#34

I think you’re on the right track
Too add a a bit of dynamism you could perhaps try to bend the human part a bit forward or just break a bit the impression that everything is happening on the same flat vertical plane (the whole body, arms, hanging fabric and sprouting branches seem kind of aligned at the moment)

#35

Sweet! Now thats more like it! I dont really have anything to crit right now… Just keep an open mind and keep implementing new ideas as they come! Looking forward to see new stuff!

-Niklas

#36

heres an other one... but iam stll not very happy … i have to do more!!

#37

and an other…

last night i had an idea for a new concept…
and i will post it soon.

#38

hi guys
just a sketch page to show my new approach. more spectific drawings are coming soon…

#39

hi guys

heres a quick sketch to show my characterIll work with.
And now it`s time to gear up for the war:buttrock:

#40

wow very unique man I like the pose :buttrock: :buttrock: