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#101

Hi dude,
I think that she must have a pet. I like the up character and the down pet.
keep it up:beer:

#102

Hi!
The pet almost looks final, perhaps you should consider a bit stronger arms, making them touch the ground (a pose like an ape or something like that, see how the apes of the Planet of the Apes are running).
Which emotion shall your char represent? She seems to be sad. Take care of her eyes, they seem to be a bit too far apart. The gap between those eyes regularly (considering humans :smiley: ) is about another eye, the inner points make a straight line down to the lips outer points when looking normal. Eyes far apart resemble those of fishes.
What will your final posing be?

#103

pues siento como si me cargara la Ver… la calaca :smiley: creo que me pego el inche influenza porcina :banghead:

i vote the same as the other guys. the white one is my favorite and should stand by her pet, but maybe some more silk is in order :smiley:

#104

Yep, with pet. I like the face in the last one but maybe lose the plaintive look, make it a little more knowing or sly perhaps. The pet is good but you could make the tail a bit more distictive, I’m not sure at the moment if it’s meant to be a scorpion stinger or a club. Nice going!

#105

NavigatorJones: okay I’m convinced, I’ll go all out with the little girl, thanks for your opinion and hope to see you around for the final comp, can always use the helpful comments, all the best bro. BTW I like how your mold sheets came out, great work. :arteest:

Sleepinglion: Jacques my friend, manipulator of all insanity :buttrock: , thanks for dropping by. I’ll be going with both characters, your right about drawing the interest of the viewer. I think I lots my way when developing Florence, but the original idea was solid. Keep up that reckless brainstorming, your work is madness. :twisted:

Ataulfo: Q mas Iban, che de q pare de españa sos. Mi madre es de Sabadel ahí en Barcelona. I hope you’ll like the final comp, I’m really trying to make both stand out and at the same time not take away from each other, ha! See you around. :thumbsup:

DeadInTheAttic: I’m glad you noticed the eyes, actually special attention was played to that, its not very apparent in the mold sheet but the wings are fins of a gold fish. I also used the basic face structure of models like Gemma Ward and Kate Moss, basically strange faces but beautiful and angelic. Thank you though and I also agree with you that the pet could use larger arms but I cant change anything I’m so late (sorry :cry: ), In the final comp the angel might give the impression, hope you’ll like it, and see you soon. :smiley:

Octostatue: oh yeah :buttrock: ! Did Ferx bail you out? With a good bottle of tequila you can fix almost anything :beer: . And will do about the whole nudity issue, wanted to join the fun but no, maybe for next time, alright see you soon. And get to work on your molding times a ticking, leave the tequila and siesta for after the comp, hahaha! :smiley:

#106

BaronImpossible: alright Simon, I’m glad you could take a look, and your opinion is much esteemed (I had to look up plaintive :cry: ). With the girl, I was thinking of a feel like she weeps for humanity, but I’ll go for something more possessed by a superior power, a little more insane :twisted: . And you got me with the tail, I was so sick of working on the guy I couldn’t make up my mind so I just left it different in each one, I didn’t think anyone would notice, but the all watching evil eye did, ha! Thanks gain, big hug bro! :smiley:

#107

Hey Daniel,

Cool work so far!! :smiley: I like the concept with florence like now, and yes you need to play down the sensual side a bit. If you have time maybe you can give a try to florence like a young lady :smiley: and play more with the sensual side, but I like a lot florence child expression in this concept :D, and the keys and the keyhole are a very unique and original idea.
Your final concept painting need to have both, florence and the beast. Agree with Simon (BaronImpossible) about the tail issue for the beast :smiley:
Cheers my friend!! :beer: + tequila!! :smiley:

(Vas muy bien Daniel y a darle duro que queda poco tiempo, a meterle duro al tequila y a pintar como un loco :D)

#108

here is what I’ve got so far. I know the pose looks a little funny, need to figure that out, maybe wile I sip my tere-quila (thanks Gerardo). okay everyone back to work (after leaving a comment if you can :smiley: ), and all the best to everyone hows got too work extra hard to have this done on time, we’ll make it :beer:

#109

I’d take his left arm and make him touch the ground (to keep its balance), while his right arm is reaching for something.
The hands looking more like claws might fit better, not that smooth and sharp tips.

#110

Hey Dan,

Yes, the pose is kinda weird. Especially the legs. Maybe try some sketches with the girl and environment ( as far it is planed) to get a better feeling for the whole?
The arms are pretty cool, but the hand are too human like. I would agree with deadintheattic, that claws would fit better.

Gotta go to sleep now … long day man… long day… :smiley:

#111

Hi Daniel, I like the colors on your last sketch.

Igual subiendole los brazos te puede quedar una pose mas agresiva.
keep it up:beer:

#112

Looking good, specially the head and arms. The chest / lower body appears unnaturally twisted, however, mainly due to the sternum (breast-bone, centre of the chest) not meeting the lower part of the creature’s neck.

Nice job, though, keep it up :slight_smile:

#113

looking good so far. Like the others, i dont like the legs and the pose of the lower part of the body. It looks like hes toddling like Baloo from the Jungle Book. But im sure you get this right. Keep it on!

#114

Hola Daniel, I see you got a lot of feedback about the girl and beast (and about not corrupting a child, you sick son of a b* :p), and I think you’re aiming in the right direction. About the composition so far, yeah I agree that the pose is a bit awkward and I can’t see where Florence fits in…:hmm:

There’s a million ways to go with this concept, like having Florence pointing at an enemy offscreen and telling her beast to attack; or ridding over him away fron danger; or sitting over his shoulder while he remains calm and tamed. She could be standing inocently while her pet lurks in the back watching over her; or Florence could have his arms wrapped around her tenderly while she sleeps.
I read the descriptions you made about the characters and the scene, and although they are very good, you have to be realistic about how much information you can get across in one single image. You have to find the composition that best describes the relationship between these two, and try not to rely on words to describe your concept. I guess that’s THE best piece of advice I’ll give you thoughout this challenge.

Dale pa’ delante pederasta! :stuck_out_tongue:

#115

Ferx: che q bueno verte por estos lados. I’m so so so late, I’ll have to pass on the tequila, food, sleep and all the essentials. Thanks for the support and your opinion is always a good one, I’ll be going for the little girls since its what everyone liked the best. Un abrazo bien grande, y fuerza loco, todo va salir bien! :beer:

DeadInTheAttic: Yeah hi pose is not looking good and I’ll have to change the whole thing. The reason I’m giving him normal hands was to create some contrast in his appearance (he originally had claws), and give him more of a crafty air and not just a big dumb beast, I’ll give them more ageing and a rougher texture. Thank you so much I really appreciate you dropping by. :arteest:

Jack: How did you get so ahead of me, god your fas :bowdown: t, and I’m so slow , Im going to go for something simple, time is flying and I’m stuck, I just cant get this dude to look right, I think it’s a little over my head. I’ve got it in my head but cant put it on paper :banghead: , guess I’ll go for a little compromise, the important think is to finish. Thanks for dropping by. I think you’ll like the hands when I finish them.

Ataulfo: che gracias por pegarte un vuelta. SI como dije voy a hacer algo simple. I hop you like it. I really wanted something aggressive and action packed, well maybe for next year. Keep it up bro! :thumbsup:

BaronImpossible: Tks for the visit, your so right. Thanks for the explanation :blush: . I’ll get up and try again. Your stuff is incredible BTW, looking at your and others process I’ve learned a lot for next year, and how to avoid getting in such a fix for time. I’ll have to rush it :cry: .

MR: thanks bro. I have such a hard time getting all my influences out of my system, I thought about having my beast throwing a coconut, but don’t think that would go over too well. Thanks for paying a visit, all the best amigo. :beer:

Ger: I was hoping you would show up soon :scream: , I was feeling a little lost. You’ve turned into some what of a guru for me :bowdown: , I’ve always needed someone to slap some sense into me. I should have gone for something more simple and static (like lots of your ideas), I’m not up to this action stuff to over my head. Your counsel is much appreciated master Ger, and I will make good use of it. Cuidate loco, y gracias por salvarme de 10 años de carcel, sos un hero!

#116

#117

i think u should give it a spine twist… it’s way too flat now with the pubis straight to camera… it kills depth give it an angle and u could work out some cool stuff also with the shin/fur effect of the twist on the waist

#118

Hi live2contage maybe you can do it jumping with his hands up ,something like throwing a big energy ball , well nice monster

Good luck :wink:

#119

Hey Daniel,

Cool updates :smiley: Like the skin texture for the beast, looks really great. Agree with the comments about the pose, looks a bit stif, think the before image have a more dynamic gesture. The background of the last is really great , like the color on it and cool enviroment :smiley: Cheers!! :beer: + tequila :smiley:

(Pues a darle duro que queda poco tiempo. Siento que debes buscar una pose más dinámica para la bestia sangrienta :smiley: Toma algunas referencias y haz bocetos rápidos de algunas poses, nada detalladas, nada más para darte idea, sólo un comentario :slight_smile: Y a darle ché !! :smiley: )

#120

Yor working hard:beer:

Ok some suggestions:

Composition: Enlarge your canvas on one side. The creature fills your whole picture, that makes the composition a bit boaring.

Light: Your creature is too bright contrary to the background. You could`t backlight him therefore you have put him in to shadow and light only some spots with a light source in the front.

Anatomy. The figure looks a bit stiff. Twist his upper part of his body a bit. You can also put his right arm more to our right so that he disguises a bit of his torso.

I hope I can help a bit.

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