DWIV -2D-Cyborg-Entermachine

#1

Good luck!
Here is my first sketch.

After the battle, ERNTEMACHINE walk through the pile of dead Norms lying on the battlefield to collect brains of the strongest generals and arms from the best engineers and surgeons.
For strategic purpose, she could ask the other machines to kill a precise general, with is obligation to leave the brain intact.
She won’t take part to the fight, she’s made for strategy, organisation of offensives, using the generals’ knowledges stored in their brain. She can connect five at once to her CPU, not more.The brains are protected by glass tubes on her back.

hope you like. C&C welcome =)

#2

Ah ah sympa! I like the idea and concept. Maybe the concept drawing could go a be more crazy?
Nice anyway.

#3

Great concept and very nice silhouette.

#4

Indeed. I like…very menacing.

#5

Great concept neobear. Very neat, can’t wait for more updates!

#6

wow, i like the concept a lot and the silhouettes are great! I like how you’ve added the surgeons arms, the face and the tail. It gives it a slight creepy organic look.

Looking forward to seeing more! :smiley:

#7

Love the background and inspiration for your concept, cant wait to see your progress on this!

#8

cool drawings, i like the quad arms idea on a machine.

#9

Good outlines and concept. It reminded me of the 3D winner of DWII right away. Not sure if that’s a good thing but you could try and explore some more and see if you can lose the similarity. Good Start.

#10

Love the idea. Long live the Machines!

#11

yeah it was my thought immediately too… I love it but it seems very close.

#12

Thanks for comments very appreciated.

>>> Raresh - Intervain
I have just see the winner of DWII (http://www.dominancewar.com/spotlights/taehoon/taehoon1.htm ) This one ?
I haven’t find his speech about his character, but I think the concept is totally different, but the outline look like his one, you are right. In color it will be different, i’m sure.
I Will rework the legs for detach from his concept. I will not touch the high of body cause I really like it. Another way It to put her tracked, i will try with that.

Thanks =)

#13

Must agree with RaresH.

The overall silhouette is very similar.

I will not touch the high of body cause I really like it.

Unfortunately I think the body is the very similar part. The hips, spine, upper chest, head stock inside the chest, are exactly the same.
The legs and arms have some similarities but give enough variations.

#14

A quick update with Tracked. She looks different a little. And with some detail on her head and armor she will be totally different.

#15

Hey Neobear ! Not totally fan of the new version, i prefer the legged one… And the overall shape looks just a bit like DWII winner…
Maybe you should try multiple legs, like a spider…

Great concept and storyline though, can’t wait to see the evolution ! :wink:

#16

Very cool i like it, i think i prefer the version with legs more as well

#17

Hi,

Abrvpt > thanks man, if I have time I will try with spidery, I like the idea.
SpecArs4 > thanks, It is my mond to, so for the moment I keep my first version.

Here is a little sketch with more details and somme colors to show you the way I take.
She dosen’t look like any more at the character of DWII.

#18

Nice new sketch you have there. the stretched skin is a very nice touch. I also agree that the legged version looks better, and more legs would give the machine more presence and menace. Perhaps the containers could hold brains with eyes and spinal columns for an added gruesome touch. just a thought to go with the torn skin!

#19

Whether be it two, or three or how many you wish.
But the last version looks a bit like No 5. The upper part is as fierce as it should be at war ^^

#20

great design, love the idea, keep going !!