Hey jacob, your work is coming out just great. Good detailing and lighting. For me i lack all those skills. Just looking at your work is bringing in the mood of things. I love it man… keep it up and hope to see the final result gl to you…
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ChaosShannon
#109
This amazing I like the over composition, ? what made u come up with that background right there? Are still going to put the logo on there, I thought that we need to keep the logo visible, anyway Good, Great, Awesome, Keep rocking it!:buttrock:
DanielCortes
#110
wow! I’m really enjoying this piece, its powerful and dramatic. I also enjoy the atmosphere with the devastation and building, mixing in with a fantasy type creature. I agree with sticking to this comp, good call. There are only 2 things I notice that at first glance might look a little of. One of them is the chains, there sagging were the mount is, and have tension on the other side. I figured its because their attached to a ring on the mount, maybe you can make it more noticeable. I also like what you did to the head but if you add a little more depth to the angle on the jaw line and maybe fiddle around with the eyes a bit it would help some. It gives me the impression its a little flat now. Anyhow I dont know much about angles at all, but just an idea. Cant wait for your final entry, its gonna be great. Cuidate loco Jack, un fuerte abrazo y gracias por siempre pasar a dar buenos consejos, nos veos man! 
yakonusuke
#111
Hey guys!
Peter: Thanks man!
ChaosShannon: Thank you! I added the logo in this update. 
Daniel: Tanks mate! You’re right with that chain issue! I will try to solve that!
And same with the head. I had a strange feeling bout that part since i changed the angle, but good you made this advice!
Great to have you man, your opinion is always appreciated!
Y de nada! Si puedo me gusto ayudar otros! Muchas gracias a ti tambien!
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yakonusuke
#113
Stutts: 
!
Well. I think it’s finished.
If you have suggestions let’em come! I will try to include them if I think it pushes the
result a lot.
If not, a big thanks for the support to everybody! I appreciate the time you took for me!
It was a great challenge! Next time will surely join again.
Good luck to ya all!
ROBOTTANK
#114
wow, very awesome man, I guess I only have a few minor things…I’d put a little highlight from the torches on the back of the horns, the hind legs look too thin near the ankles ( I’d put more muscle on them), and I think I’d like to see the flames redone on the torches, they just look a bit like paint brushes not flames. but regardless, wonderful job overall!
yakonusuke
#115
Thank you Robbottank! Yea… the torches suck.
Actually they bothered me since the first minute.
I will give it another try. Thank you for the support!
StefanoDubay
#116
all gr8 here!
one thing: if u harpoon something and u pull the arrow end will anchor in the victims flesh… while now they stick out from their back wasting the pull effect of course in case of a barbed harpoon you could have them sticking out more because of the barbs along the lenght, i know it’s fairly minimal BUT tht’s one of the first thing i saw looking at it…
I kniow also u were shooting for a very diffure lighting but having a more concrete shadows, mostly because of the light sources given by the flames, casting on the ground would weight the steed a bit more, u could tone up the lighting on the character because of them mostly on the hair strands on the little mean one…
i know u are probably sick and tired now but i would love u to use all the time given to make your outstanding work stand out even more!
keep it up master
ciao
S
yakonusuke
#118
Thank you for the suggestions Stefano!
I fixed the harpoon issue, but changing the whole lighting would be too complicated to do last minute. Besides I like ground how it is so I wouldn’t like it elsewise. But thanks again, very appreciated!
Thanks Donglu! Glad you think so!
Well I’ve redone some parts like the torches, which fit better now I think, but still aren’t as great as I would have had them.
Deadline is near.
I won’t change anything anymore. So it’s done!
Thanks again to you for all the support! And lots of luck with the judging!
GaeasHerald
#119
This is one of my favourites in the 2D category. I think you’ve got good chances of bringing a medal home. Best of luck Jakob!
OKMER
#120
One of my favs here.
Great work Jacob!
I know it’s too late but maybe if the creature would have looked towards us ,could have been cool.Or his tail coming towards us to create just a tiny bit more deepness/3D feeling as there is already.
Anyway amazing concept & great execution!
All the best!
-Remko
ChaosShannon
#121
wow I will be voting for you man Like your work and style check mine out and tell me what you think…
yakonusuke
#122
Geraldo: Thanks again.
Remko: Thanks man! Too bad you didn’t enter the war! Cheers mate
ChaosShannon: Thank you! I will do that.
StefanoDubay
#123
wunderbar main freund
is awesome, your style is top knotch, there is a great variation between the complex steed and the smooth look on the prince very effective
best wishes and good luck
DanielCortes
#126
hey loco jack, what nice work. big inspiration to me the whole comp. your work was steady and it was good learning for me to follow your process. Thanks again for all your support during the comp it was a big help, see you around hermano!
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#127
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