DWIV - 2D - alexy - La'agra

#1

Hello everybody,

    I'm new here but I decide to join your forces. So this is my WIP. Do not hesitate to leave some comments cause I really need to draw better :p
    
    [b]Name : [/b]La'agra[b]
    Race : [/b]Machines[b]
    Class : [/b]Cyborg
    
    
    Let's start with some concept board :
       
       [img]http://lifesized.free.fr/DWIV/Concept_design_01.jpg[/img]
       
       [img]http://lifesized.free.fr/DWIV/Concept_design_02.jpg[/img]
       
       
       [img]http://lifesized.free.fr/DWIV/Concept_design_03.jpg[/img]
       
       
       [img]http://lifesized.free.fr/DWIV/Concept_design_04.jpg[/img]
#2

Hello people,

Here is the first part of my unit turn-around. I still need some ideas to give more “humanity” to my Cyborg :l

Hope you like it :]

#3

Hello guys,

Second part of the turn around with a side view (without arms) and some weapon’s test. I’m not very happy for the weapons yet :s

Enjoy :slight_smile:

#4

very nice stuff.:slight_smile: :thumbsup:

keep it up:beer:

#5

Cool design ! Maybe this could help for the weapon.

I especially like the 4th one. ^^

#6

Thanks a lot Ataulfo for your comment :slight_smile:

Abrvpt : In fact, I’m looking for a very simple spear with a “bone design” like my cyborg. The 4th one was inspired by Balsa’s spear from “Seirei no moribito” :stuck_out_tongue:

Thank you very much for the picture :slight_smile: I think I’ll try some other test with the second spear idea :stuck_out_tongue:

#7

Very nice start…i really like what you have going on here. I’d kill to be able to draw…you have no idea how much i admire people with drawing skills :slight_smile:

#8

Hey Alexandre,

Nice concept and sketches! :smiley: Like a lot the big feet on your cyborg, look really great. Maybe you can give a try a more technological and sophisticated weapon for your character, only a comment :slight_smile: Good luck and waiting for more updates!! Cheers!! :beer:

#9

FMMirel : Thank you very much :slight_smile: If my little drawings give you that feeling, I’ve allready win my own challenge :p[b]

Ferx :[/b] After reading your comment, I decide to add more details on the Cyborg body :] Now I’m still working on various spears but it’s kinda hard to design a “robotic” spear and something simple on the same time :stuck_out_tongue: Anyway, thank you very much for your comment :]

Here is a new turn-around with more details and a first try for the human head :

Enjoy :]

#10

Very cool! Love the spear designs. Can’t wait to see the character in action!

#11

numabrush : Thank you very much for your reply :slight_smile:

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Here is some new spears. For the moment, my favorite are number 2 and 6. Maybe I’ll try number 2 with a longer stick and dual swords :stuck_out_tongue:

Please leave some comments, it will be very helpul for me :]
Enjoy !

New boards tomorrow :slight_smile:

#12

I like this concept!, very, very original, the character have potencial. Maybe, you can add more details in the machine parts.

#13

Hey Alexy,

Looking really good :smiley: like the “S” form for your character. For the spears, maybe you can attach some sort of battery, and add som rays and sparks to it, too looks electrical charged :smiley: only a silly idea :slight_smile:

#14

sarrowpichi : Thanks a lot for your comment :slight_smile: I’ll try to add more details on the machine part with the colors :wink:

Ferx : Thanks a lot too :applause:I was thinking about something electrical but I don’t know if I’m skilled enough to paint it cause it’s easy to compare electric with magic when it’s not done correctly :smiley: Anyway, thank you for the idea :slight_smile:

#15

Hello everybody,

Here is some update with color test. I have to say that painting is really a pain :smiley: It’s really hard to get something cool :s

So, the first shot is a detailed version of the head and a test with a battle mask :

And the second shot is a posing test. I want something dynamic for my future color test, so I draw my Cyborg in a standby way ( but he’s ready to fight :p) :

I’ll update this one very soon with more details and maybe some color :stuck_out_tongue:

Enjoy ::]

Do not hesitate to comment, I’m not very sure about the perspective yet :l

#16

Some real nice and creative concepts i love the last diagram of the upper amour and
masks! Good work mate. Keep going and good luck:)

#17

The “S” shape is definitively interesting, however i feel the abdomen /waist area seems unable to support the upper body. You might consider adding some support accessories to make them more stable? Just a suggestion, keep it up man!

#18

nzrkiwi : Thank you very much for your comment :slight_smile: Btw, your nickname is epic to say :smiley:

AlienKing : I like the S form too :stuck_out_tongue: I think you’re right for the upper body but I thought it’s a cyborg, a machine and we can have some little liberty with the anatomy :smiley:

I’ll try to add something but I really want to keep the “S” form clear :slight_smile: I think I can add something in the back :]

Anyway, here is an update of yesterday’s sketche. I still have to draw lot of mecanic’s details :

Enjoy ::]

#19

As AlienKing said. his body shape is interesting, but you have work on his armor more,and for me his foots are too big. You could also add rib and guts below his chest armor

#20

Very nice updates. 2 and 8 spears are my favourites. I preffer your second face sketch, the masked one.
Keep it up:beer: