Oh, wow. I spoke too soon. It’s looking sharp!
A couple of things are bugging me, though:
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It’s kind of blending into the black background, so adding some back light or a bit of rim light (though not too much) might give it a bit of pop.
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The face is kind of blending into the shoulder/chest region because the color and specularity are so simlar. You may want to add a bit more color or specular variation to make the face a little more readable.







