blindsyte: Actually I have decided to go with insect wings for now, I’m not quiet happy with swirly wings:). For hair I don’t have much polycounts left, lets see If I’m able to add some planes for hair then I will definetely do it. Thanx for suggestions dude:).
SONIC-X: Thanx Dude:beer:
I think the wings dont really make him any more agressive. Id get rid of them, and use the extra polies to build him some hair, or a helmet.
Its looking prettu good right now.
Cool, lookin like a game character! 
Airflow’s got a a point that the wings currently detract from the Bad-Ass look, but i still like em to be there.
Maybe try changing the shape a bit ?
hi looks great…
I thing check blue light its not match… just sugestion…
Lets rock:thumbsup:
Airflow: Wings are important for him, so that he can fly and defend. I have changed his wings
LavenPillay: Thanx for replying. I have changed his wings little bit:).
somu01: Hey thanx dude:). I have just changed the colour of spot light to blue. So that colour of lightning fx can be seen on his body.
Yes, the wings look much better. But when you designed them they should have looked like they could get his weight airborne. I would have gone for a beetle type wing, and made them massive and imposing, its far more threatening now than before so its ok.
I love the staff.
What’s most detracting from his wings is the opacity map you have applied. Where all the black lines are, there should be some form or definition of what the actual wing or paper thing part is attached to. There should be some specular definition and color variation. Right now you can see through every part of the wings when you should only be able to see through the paper thing parts. Now you could have it made out that way already, but from the way the renders looks, it appears that in your opacity map, the black parts are pure white and the wings are a mid to light grey. The pure white should be black in the opacity map.
Concept is cool, texture looks ok, but I’m not a big fan of his weapon or the way his legs bend or his weapon. Could use a lot more detailing on the face as well.Good work.
Hi everybody, here is my beauty render:). I’m just trying to finish it now:D fully loaded with work.
Looking good, very cool effect with his weapon on the beauty image.
Tiny crit thought, move the character backwards just a bit. With 1000x1000, at least on my tiny screen its impossible to grasp your entire character.
And I would turn his head another 5-10 degrees or so, so he dont stair straight into the camera.
Haven’t seen this in a long time and it has turned very cool now! 
I agree with Firerbert in that the wing’s structure seems too monotonic. Maybe one thing you can employ is to put main, thicker veins and reduce the secondary/tertiary veins’ thickness (see this, this). Hopefully you can manage to find time for this though.
hakanpersson and XP-58: Thanx guys for support and suggestions. Rightnow I’m not finding time to work on this model. But This time I have managed to complete it in time, Cause I have a bad reputation of not finishing challenges:D. I’m thinking of uploading my final images today, before that I will like to know is the CGS logo visible in my wining pose image or its okay if it is less visible in my winning pose but in beauty render it is very nicely visible.
Any suggestions:).
Hi everybody, below are the final images which I have already submitted.
Thanx to everyone for big support and help.
All the best to everyone.
Winning pose:
[img]http://www.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_meJu3ukQQDadnLoVpXbFSJV5a.jpg[/img]
[img]http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_meJu3ukQQDadnLoVpXbFSJV5a.jpg[/img]
Beauty Shot:
[img]http://www.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_H1d13aRBynEr2fejPmrkbgxHo.jpg[/img]
[img]http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_H1d13aRBynEr2fejPmrkbgxHo.jpg[/img]
Construction Shot:
[img]http://www.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_UmIOMC4FbHixpyxjJ9dGAPYWY.jpg[/img][img]http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_UmIOMC4FbHixpyxjJ9dGAPYWY.jpg[/img]
Texture Sheet:
[img]http://www.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_Qp_VKabOqjPX_fUm0_RO0ej2x.jpg[/img][img]http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_36658_Qp_VKabOqjPX_fUm0_RO0ej2x.jpg[/img]
Concept Sheet:
Wow
That looks crazy good
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=234&t=604654&page=6&pp=15
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