thanks Stacy
. Yea, it’s one of the ones I like more too.
- Kieran
I lean towards 2,8 or 9 or variations of those shapes as well. Something assymmetrical and still of enough size to convey mass that he could swing to great effect. Do the shapes on his back need to be the same as his weapon (or am I missing the point, are they representative of the weapon when he’s carrying it on his back)? Could they be other shapes of weapons/implements that you could add variety to the design with? For example, something along the lines of a projectile weapon for ranged attacks could be slung over his shoulder. Just throwing out ideas 
Looking forward to more!
Sweet thanks 
The weapons don’t need to be the same on his back, i’ll have to try out some different ones on his back, or maybe have him holding something different. Thanks for the suggestions 
-Kieran
I changed the weapon again. I am also trying out some different designs. Still havn’t picked what the final one should be. The clothing is different as well.

thanks,
Kieran
Here is another update!
. I have updated the weapon. I think the new weapon has a little stronger presence than the previous. And he only has one on his back now rather than two ( I guess I’m supposed to only have two total right ?) I hope you like!
thanks,
Kieran

I added a strap on his chest, and put a little piece of armor on his shoulder.
Please let me know what you think. Comments and critiques are greatly appreciated! 
thanks 

I like 8 and 9:) Actually I like No. 8 more because of that little more wider blade. I like your latest concept with strap on his chest, looks good.
Concept is really cool, I think you should stick with Rock/earth element.
All the best:thumbsup:
Actually I like him with 2 weapons on his back. The rules ask for max 2 similar artifacts, but you can have any number of non-artifact weapons (see here), so you can make the 2 on the back as additional weapon while the real artifact is the one he’s holding, gotta make that one at least looks more artifact-like from the rest though.
In any case I like the spear-like weapon (that you chose) best. I feel that the upward pointing feel of the weapon fits the figure nicer than the wing-like ones.
Keep up the good work! ![]()
Hey Kieron… lookin kool so far…
Personally - i think he could look a bit more imposing… I’d like to see you go more bold on the design… maybe try something really out there - like giving him huge forearms, or really heavy spear… etc… just something to bring out more of an imposing force out of him… or maybe even a darker side to him as it’s an invoker…
Anyways - i’ll keep checkin in on ur thread… keep the updates comin and best of luck to ya!
Peace.
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XP-58: Cool! Thanks for the link. It really helps. Yea I like him with two on his back, but I also like it with one. I’ll try some iterations with both. Thanks for the advice on the artifact. I totally agree.
chindian: Thanks Dood!
Maybe making the spear even heavier could have a nice effect.
I’ve started my proxy, and will be posting that up soon.
thanks,
Kieran
the weapons seem way to big for him. i know you want them to have a presence, but i don’t think they should be bigger then him. i would shrink them down and the add like a streamer to the staff where the blade meets. that would give it some drama and let you have more realistic weapon sizes.
Thanks Man! Yea, I guess I don’t know what to do right now. Some people like it larger, some don’t. So I will have to give it some thought and try out different sizes. For now, i’m going to work on the body more, then come back to the weapon. Thanks for the suggestion 
Proxy to follow.
thanks,
Kieran
Okay. Here is my proxy! finally I still have a lot to do to it. I plan on doing some sculpting while continuing to work on his attire and weapons.
thanks!
