DWIII-3D-gerudir-[TBA]

#17

Hello Geru
You have nice concept sketches.
I’ve only one suggestion - his wings could be a little bigger, so he would look more powerfull i think.
Nice to see you here on the battlefield. Good luck!

#18

hey - nice concept… look forward to seeing more…

One crit - other than the anatomy crits so far… the head looks stretched in the Y - kinda too long… dunno if that’s intentional - but not really workin for me… Anyways - i’ll keep following the thread and see where u go with this.

All the best and keep up the work!
Peace.
_T

#19

[left]hey evryone, i’m working with my wings now, and i 'm looking for the best arc line and anatomy, this is still in progres but the problem is that it’s a big man so he needs big well done wings :slight_smile:

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#20

hey nice update wings looks nice but now show me some more definined body cant wait for next update

#21

Small update .now i think is time for detail

#22

hey looking pretty cool man, like the detail in the wings

#23

Hey man… kool to see you’re progressing…
I think the skin on the top of the wing looks kinda wierd and out of place though… why would there be skin there like that? The wrinkles on the wings looks a bit too busy as well… think about making more “hero” wrinkles and some smaller supporting ones instead of covering the whole thing so evenly…Also think about adding some wear and tears on the wings. As to the guy - I’m still not quite diggin the face - still looks stretched to me.
Anyways - keep up the work man! Lookin forward to seein more.

Peace.
_T

#24

hey man
great update proportions i see you’ve corrected proportions finally and they work great there are just 2 areas that i think are not working right now first are the wings i totally don’t like their shape right now and for me they more decorative right now then functional i don’t think that i this placement they could actually support him in the fly
second area is a arms i think that your brachialis muscel in arms is a to small and the ams looks kinda strange from front view
great progress

Pawel

#25

great modeling work so far…:thumbsup: proportions are fine for me… the wings looks great, it looked a bit little in the concept, but now it seems that these can support him.

#26

Hey, guys this is my next update for this work, of course it’s still in progress ,
For now I’m working with attachment and details of bottom character’s part.
Thanks for comments,
cya

#27

Hey Does anyone know how can i chang post title?

#28

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#29

The twisted demonic Mongol looks real sweet! Can’t wait to see you texture this!

#30

It’s really nice to see your progress with this work, Just awesome job!one of the most “well done” i saw around .
have a great week

#31

Looking cool. You may want to make sure you don’t have too much high frequency detail or it may end up looking like niose on the character. I really like the feel of the boots. The just look heavy.

#32

Wow great update it really starts to look very powerful and mighty
but the shader on the body looks a little bit stange or maybe the detail i a little bit to big any way great work so far can’t wait to see the textures

#33

Looking good. Nice work with the cgs logo. Overall the character works really well, nothing specific to crit at all. Looking forward to see how the lowpoly works.
One tiny crit might be pretty much what jbrophy said, specially with the wings it might look nice to have some larger foldings and not just small uniform sized ones.

#34

If you make his chest smooth it will be a resting area for the eye. It will enhance your model tremendously. Great Job!

#35

Hey, you.

As someone said before the upper part looks a bit noisy. Prolly because of this scratched_metal material, but since its gonna be textured it shouldnt be a problem, right? :slight_smile:

Im not the biggest fan of you characters head style, but I know you and if youve decided that it should look just like this I wont even try to convince you :wink:

See ya :wink:

#36

magia
jbrophy
PSekal
hakanpersson
lacluna
DruG
Guys Thanks for your comments it was really helpful, There are still some place for finishing but I’ll do it just before burning normals ,because there are a little time :slight_smile: I hope they’ll change date;D, So I start normalllllllllllllllllsssssssss
The holes in wings and skirt I’ll do with alpha
take care