DWIII - 2D - The Flork - Angel Grinder

#81

nice final action pose!

#82

HI Pal!
I have spend many time during finding good action pose, and when i was search it i have ask FredH about it, so we can use any creative pose, but main goal for we can see as many character details as we can, so here is what he’s wrote to me:
“Yes, it’s important to show your character in full. But, you can still make a creative pose… just don’t hide too much.”

I’m afraid in you action pose many details hided, dont you?

#83

yeah i kept that in the back of my head while comming up with concepts. i think the only thing im loosing is the angel on the back, witch isnt that important for me to get in. as long as i have his chest and fetus and the angel guns in it.

what do you think im loosing?

#84

well, you know i have angel too and during pose research i have meet problems that here we first of all do not illustration and pose of the character to show his features and details in scene. So for me i find pose where i show his details important details as i thinks and also show wings from bottom and from top because i think i should show all my interesting ideas. But in same time i find dinamicly pose to make picture interesting, for sure on my opinion only:) So here in your illustration, we dont see wings at all, main attention to the guns and girls on it, also you hide some interesting things i guess, but in same time its interesting and dinamic pose, may be do camera view not from this point and a little move it to the right and upper? You will save pose expression but show more and could show full character with guns and wings. Yes you will loose a little in dramatic look but expression will be same and we will see more features of your creature! Its only my opinion i’m not sure i’m fully right, but any way, may be it have a sense.

#85

i see what your saying, but the wings are the angel’s on his back so there not that important and their hard to draw any way HAHA but ill sketch it out like you say tommorow see if it stick ;-D

#86

cool! thanks man!

#87

Thanks man! hopefully i can fuh-ness it alittle more and make it better :smiley:

#88

ok! progress haha
here are the final lines for the front back and guns. i have the rest sketched out but not refined :-/
let me know if somethings off

#89

Very cool, Christopher. The line art’s looking great! I can’t wait to see what you do with the colors (or values, as the case may be for the Concept- and Modelining-sheets.) Keep going with it!

#90

Thanks Michael! haha im kinda scared to go into the coloring haha im not so confident in digital painting haha.

#91

Really nice update, love the line art.

This is one of the most cool entries from the contest. The concept is awesome.
Congrats!

I’m here waiting for updates.

Cheers,

#92

Thanks Jorge! more commin later today! :smiley:

#93

wow, the lineart is awesome, its very neat and clear, you are not confident in painting and im not comfortable in doing lineart!:smiley:

#94

thanks! hopefully once i win this thing and get that cintiqu ill be a painting machine hahaha

#95

OK! here is my side view and the back peace. i don’t think i need another view of it do you?

maybe ill do turnarounds of the fetus as well. what do you guys think?

#96

Hi Angel,

Cool concept and great model sheet process of your designs, very interesting to think about them if they have an ethnic symbolism and meaning? Never the less looks powerful and magical excellent work!:thumbsup: Nice to see new artist coming along:arteest:

#97

Looking really good… cant wait to see some colors!

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#98

Hey Christoper, really cool design !! really amazing details on all of the character :thumbsup:
About your composition, looks nice the radial design, but the right arm takes a lot of atention ( he is aming, and the viewer follow his arm, but the right arm is cuted and the eyes go out of the canvas and distracted on the other elements) , I think you need to zoom out :smiley: the character, only a comment :slight_smile: Again, cool and awesome work! Cheers :beer:

#99

Thanks! yeah i thought about trying not to have any ethic stuff in it haha i want it to be its own thing yah know, i did try and make sure the designs of the artifact and the warriror where diffrent and maybe their own kinda ethinic :smiley: haha

#100

thanks! if you are any one els has any suggestions on colors im all ears… or eyes as the case may be haha