DWIII - 2D - The Flork - Angel Grinder


#41

Hey man - thanks for the comment on my thread! As per your concepts - I like no.2 for the chest for sure!! As to the rest - it’s kinda hard seeing how it will all work together when they separate like that… But everything so far is lookin really good. Can’t wait to see your 3D.
Maybe try some mixing and matching with the pieces you like so we can see how they fit together as a whole?.. just a suggestion.

Keep up the good work!
-T


#42

wow dude, great girls guns!!! cool concept.


#43

Thanks guys!
here are some put together armors!


#44

haha ok so that didnt work so well…
lets try this.


oh yeah and this guy


#45

hey Flork - thanks for the input on my thread!
I am really digging your designs and drawing style.
I am liking no.2 and the extra guy (no. 6) - 6 is my fav tho! Really works well to me. Only thing is - it might be a bit busy - so be careful with that - and also look at adding some asymmetry to him…

Coming along well - and I look forward to more updates! Keep it up!

Cheers.
-T


#46

ah gotta love midturms! ill pick back up again next week, but for now some quick sketeches between classes.

heres a quick marker sketch i did of an armor

and here i started to think about the angle gun

and the back pace that will be attached to the guns

then i decided i don’t want any spikes or edges in the angle artifact weapons and keep all the jagged and spike stuff for the monster to really push the contrast between the two . heres a softer angle back, but i was getting tired when i did this one lol


#47

Hey Christopher… wooooow, what can i say?? :smiley: all of your sketches are great, and I like a lot your style and concepts, cool !! Again, awesome work !! and looking forward for more updates!! Cheers mate! :beer:


#48

impressive amount of job man, great work :thumbsup:


#49

thanks Ferx and TOLEDO! hopefully i can get back to this soon! but school comes first :frowning:


#50

Well, good luck with school then! Meanwhile, I like designs #3 and the original. (But most of them have interesting stuff going on in the head and shoulders, so it’s hard to say.) I like how #3 hilights the foetus. #2 and #4 get a bit overbearing with the stomach-skull, and I feel that to original design at the bottom incorporates the skull without it taking over.

As for the artifact, that’s just bizarre. But hey, you’re taking the idea and running with it, so kudos to you there. Good luck, both with your entry and school. :slight_smile:


#51

Thanks Walrus! haha yeah i agree, the designs are way to crazy, in the finaly they will be toned down alot, but i felt the simple black and white needed some spunk lol but i got carried away some times lol

and not to worrie, i got my school stuff down, its just just a matter of time managment now but i should be done with the school stuff in the next 2 days :smiley:


#52

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ONLY 5 DAYS LEFT! LOL shoots self in the face
Ok so its cram time now lol
i did quite a few quick comps and ideas on the boat yesterday and ill just show all of them, I’m having a hard time showing him and his guns shooting at the same time ANY HELP WITH THIS WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED!
my idea for the final image is him blowing away the other forum entries.

and then i designed some more guns, again going with a more angelic design with no sharp edges.


this last one i was thinking he could set one loose and it would run around like a dog lol

and another back peace

and then thinking what they would look like if they combined when there not on him


#53

Hey Christoper, nice studies for your final pose. I like a lot the Num. 9. The vertical composition on a trinagular form can make a real powerful look on your character :D, only a comment :slight_smile:

And not left 5 days, is an extension of 5 days more!! :smiley: (you re scaring people!! hahahahah myself included :D) the war finish on 04/12/2008 :smiley: Cheers Mate :beer:


#54

haha Fernando your a life saver! lol im still gonna pretend theres only 5 days left to keep the fear in me lol haha but now any thing is possible! 5 whole days to draw and 5 whole days to color! the future isnt looking so dim lol and yeah i think im leaning twords 9 as well, seems the best way to get all the points across i want to :smiley:


#55

really cool idea the D gun


#56

Thanks! :smiley:


#57

nice drawing~ damn~ :slight_smile:


#58

Thanks Jin! Your portfolio is inspiring :smiley:

heres my latest comp, hopefully adds a little more drama


#59

I almost had a heart attack when I read 5 days left, whats wrong with you! just kidding man 5 days more, thats sweet my computer died last week and I was so worried about not making it but now it is back! anyway. Crazy concept dude the girl that turns into somekind of bug.is just awesome for the final pose 9 I’ll have to say.
good luck. and Im out of here, its time to paint.


#60

The action poses sketches rocks. I’d like to see some comics with this character.

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