DWIII - 2D - Lockwyn - Wyark


#1

I guess its time to stop lurking and start helping.

  *Picks up a pen*
 
 Update:
 
 Going with a clericon with darkness/void as his artifact power.
 
 Heres what hes looking like so far. Story below...

Story:

  Description:  

   *A hulking, hooded form enters a clearing where a young boy sits by a fire cooking a small bird for his dinner.  The boy looks up startled with fear, as voice begins to speak from behind the dark hood*

   Might I join you my child?  My apologies, for I meant not to startle you but it is a cold dark night and your camp fire was a most welcoming sight.  Long has it been since I’ve had the pleasure of company for most do not venture into the forest of Black Trees.  So why then do you wonder alone, in the dark and so far from home?  

   You seek the Wyark?  Yes, yes, yes I know of them well, wondrous creatures till their decent into hell.  Peaceful and kind, once upon a time then broken and twisted by the fallen divine.  A demon of evil and bringer of dark, tricked and deceived the peaceful Wyark.  Corrupted and twisted, they fell from grace, now their souls reside here in this horrid place.  Bound to these trees they howl for release, for here in the darkness they may find no peace.

   So tell me my child why the Wyark you desire, for to come to this place your situation must be most dire


   A war you say?  Indeed a terrible thing, bringer of darkness and destroyer of things.  But to call forth a Wyark is no easy task, and to bind him to your service is quite a big ask.

   But having your company has been most grand, and in exchange I have decided I will lend you a hand.  To bring forth a Wyark this you must do, think of something of yours that he might want too.  Offer this gift by the light of your fire and see if it is something he might desire.

    *The boy stands idle for a moment, struggling for an appropriate offering.  The hooded voice turns slightly sly.*

   To tell you the truth I think it’s fair to say, that a Wyark would get very hungry bound to his tree all day.  I think the food right here by your fire, would be just what a Wyark would desire.  So go ahead my young man and do not delay, offer the food, he’d welcome it I’d say.

   *Apprehensively, the boy does as the strange figure suggests.  As he finishes the last words of his offering a howling gush of wind rushes into the camp and extinguishes the fire.  After a brief moment the wind subsides and the two motionless figures are left silent in the moonlight.  A few tense moments pass before a deep, croaking laugh begins to rumble from the hooded figure*

   Free

So long have I been bound to this tree, for ever and ages, an eternity! But now young one at last I am free, and it is you I have to thank for releasing me. But now am I bound to your service and this war, and so I shall fight to be free once more. Yet one end of a bargain must have another in kind, and now your end of this pact springs to my mind.

   *The boy snatches up the roasted bird on a stick, and offers it to the hulking dark figure*

   No no my boy it is not the bird I seek, your flesh and bones would be my treat.  You see young one, like me you were tricked, when making deals with the darkness you must be very specific!

   *The hulking figure pulls off the robes coving his face, revealing a confused mass of fleshy horror.  Behind writhing tentacles a gaping jaw opens wide.  The boy shrieks with pure, utter terror as the Wyark grabs him by the waist and shoves him head first into its mouth.  The terrified screams are cut short by a wet, muffled crunch
   Race: Wyark (Demon)

   Class: Clericon

   Artifact: Darkness/void

   The Wyark were once peaceful creatures, with immense power.  Yet the demon, Wyur’wen’wyark grew jealous of their power and tricked them.  He bound them for eternity deep within a plagued forest which they were unable to venture from and spread their peaceful joyfulness.  Over time the plagued forest corrupted the trees and in kind the spirits of the Wyark imprisoned within them.  They grew vengeful and bitter, lusting to inflict the pain and misery that they suffer on others.  Delighting in terror and deceptive by nature, all of their gifts come with a price, yet the price is not always clear

#2

Threw together some sketches last night. I’m not quite sure what class I want my character to be but I’m leaning towards invoker/clericon.


#3

Okay I’ve narrowed it down to these 3.


  1. I had this idea of making an uneasy character that uses darkness as his special power. Because he looked so lanky and awkward in the innitial sketch I thought it would be kind of cool if this uneasy, not very fearsome thing was walking around, then suddenly you get your face torn up and stripped from your bones. The idea of an unasuming thing turning nasty all the sudden seemed like a cool hook.

  2. Super powerful midget guys are cool, just look at yoda. With this guy I was thinking he could use darkness as well, and with his special artifact medical kit of +5 he could suck out energy from people with his tenticles and use it to infuse that dark energy in his allies (as a clericon). With his little scissors and needles he could sow flesh back together with dark power etc.

  3. This guy just looked cool. He could use his staff to gather energy from his surrounds and store it in the globe bits and then when he needs to, melt people with it.


#4

Roughing out looks at the moment. I think I’ll go with 1 though. I like the feel of it for some reason.

For the head I wanted something that covers or hides most of the features, to keep the whole mysteriouso feel I’m looking for.

The top right has tenticle things that hide his jaw and deeply recessed eyes which seems kinda cool. He can have glowing eyes or something hidden deep within the sockets.

Here I’ve added a few different looks for him. Hrmmmm.


#5

Hi! Lockwyn I think the head with the cloak one is look nice, it makes your character feel like it has something powerful hidden inside, though…

Keep going on! Cheers! :slight_smile:


#6

The small mega powerful guy in the middle was my favourite…:scream: He had potential for the dark force hahaha…but the stalker you choose looks very strong as well, as for the design for the skull; I agree that the one clocked does add more mystery and better flow as well for the animation.

Neat concepts I will see were you take all this with much interest good work!:thumbsup:


#7

A few more sketches, just fleshing out the character before I start giving him armour and what not.

I think I’ll go with clericon as the class, after all everybody needs healers, but I’ll keep using darkness/void as the power. That way he can still be nasty when he needs to. I liked the idea with the little guy using a evil healers kit +5 to heal so might incorperate that into this character somehow if I can get it to work.

/shrug

o.O

Hrmm.


#8

Follow up scribble on one of the sketches. Needs bigger shoulder pads…


#9

Hey Lockwyn,
I like this guy, he’s looking pretty cool. I was wondering about the healer kit. I think it would be sweet if it were kit bits that looked like they would heal, but damn, it would hurt. Cool!


#10

Nice work so far. I like the concept you chose. However, I’m noticing that with each render, his arms get shorter and shorter. I really thought that the original arm length was interesting and effective, and the new ones seem ineffectual… of course, having chains holding your gloves to the shoulderpads also makes them seem useless as well. He looks like he would have a hard time moving them around and getting a full range of motion. But anyhow, good luck moving forward!


#11

Thanks for the comments. The chains I have placed on him to symbolize that he is bound to a agreement that he must fullfill. As for the arms they do appear to be getting shorter, might have to make some adjustments.

Cheers:thumbsup:


#12

It’s looking good man, maybe you wanna add more chains to reinforce the boundage idea, maybe put some spiky balls at the end… just an idea.

The shroud is everything, don’t get rid of it.

great work :thumbsup:


#13

2am, time for bed

ZZZzzzZZZzzz


#14

Hahaha!! that attack sequence is killing me it’s soo funny
your character rules.


#15

Starting to run low on time, well, sort of. Vomited up some armour sketches. I liked the helmet on the lower left one and threw it into a more refined colour sketch.

Which head do you think?


#16

Few of his abilities that sprang to mind.

And a slightly more refined colour sketch, guess the link to the other one died /shrug

Hrrmmm…


#17

I like the guy with no mask his personality is very funny but if you want to cover his face use the last post.


#18

Yeah I might rip the front part of the vale off so his face is visible to a degree, otherwise your right he does lose some of his personality.

But since its 3am it can wait till tomorrow :stuck_out_tongue:

Cheers


#19

The last option you took with the vale looks very intriguing I like that for the void element since after all they feel comfortable in darkness! Although Gyorkland mention that his personality does lose a bit in this option …I think if you uncover a bit less the eyebrow shape your character will get the right way to show his attributes…:cool:

GREAT DESIGNS THOUGH!:smiley:


#20

Yeah you’re right. I fiddled with it quickly to show his face a bit more. Hes still missing something though, but what it is i’m not sure. Might have to change his staff. It was supposed to be used to suck in energy from his surrounds then he could use that energy to do his business but it doesnt really say “cleric.”

Hrmmms