DWIII - 2D - fluxen - Psionic Bomb


#43

really really good. @_@ I was waiting to see the final image … and … yeah its amazing good job man… I love the concept the weapon she is using.:thumbsup:
me too I find painter complicated with all the brushes and the options, Photoshop is just fine for me lol

I was wondering where are you going to place the logo?:wise:


#44

very nice :thumbsup: !

I like the warmer tones from the image before the last one, but that’s just a matter of personal taste. The hair in the last picture lacks contrast imo, and doesn’t integrate that well with the rest of the image.

keep it up,
-claudiu


#45

Hot damn, that is a hip illustration. There is nothing wrong with the helmet at all do the do. I also like the color changes that you’ve adjusted to. Good work overall.:thumbsup:


#46

Well, I thought I would leave the painting alone but I went back into it. I guess I’m pretty obsessed :). Thanks for the crit about the hair. I fixed that up and mostly adjusted the colors cause the previous was looking a bit muddy.

I started orthos tonight, just the front view. The helmet is tough to draw from front perspective. Luckily side view will be quite easy. The back will be a challenge but at least a fresh one.


#47

Really nice work on the color peice. Very pretty and very moody! The only crit I could suggest is to add some appropriate texture to the hair. The sillhouette reads like hair, but lacking any texture, lookin at the larger postions o hair, they feel (to me) like expanses of flech. But overall, really nice work - good luck with the rest of the modeling sheet!


#48

cool stuff. I like how this is coming along…nice colors on the painting and nice values on the ortho mate.


#49

Thanks guys. I indicated some strands of hair, just hinting at some detail. I also layed out all the pages. Hopefully I can call this done.




#50

WOW! Sang Fantastic character! I love the purple, so I love all the colors she has for power! :thumbsup: Excellnt Also the description you mentioned , its great for a good Void heroine, since they always seem to be full of evil purposes and not in her case, I also think that the hair improved a lot , but it doesn’t feel exactly as hair more like a ghost of hair, if that’s the goal looks good to me ! :slight_smile:

And if not, well then that’s the style you choose, and it’s also very respectable as well! I most say the concept sheet its my favourite since I really like to see her face, and with out legs, but the final design look really powerful and full of void magic! I wish nothing but the best in this war for your character I always like her since the beginning:thumbsup::beer::cool:


#51

Not much of an update but I submitted final images and final thumbnail today. Thanks for all the generous crits and comments. Good luck to everyone!


#52

Sang,

I didn’t even know that you were representing CGTALK. I just found your entry. Man, it came out really cool. I love the mood and colors. You get better with each piece you do. The idea with your relic is really cool as well. Good luck!

Ted


#53

hey fluxen :slight_smile:

i just want to say, nicely done :), very “nicely done”.

good luck, love your work


#54

ok see now this is what im wondering, is the concepts page supposed to be the concepts we went threw, or the concept of what your character can do?! every one seems to be doing what their characters powers and stuff are :-/


#55

great work Sang! I especially like the concept sheet. It has some nice, loose yet structured sketching. Good luck!


#56

Thanks guys.

Flork: Well the submission guideline says “initial rough draft sketches.” Perhaps the stuff the character can do was part of their brainstorming.

kinonato: Thank you. Good luck to you as well mate!

El-Ruco: Hey Piero! Glad to see you here. Thanks for you comment. Sketching loose while having structure is something I admire and hope to become better at. I’m going to check out your entry. :wink:


#57

great details~

nice work!!


#58

yeah your right! i red threw everything possible to read hahaha its just supposed to be progress with abilitys thrown in if yah want. look like a lot of people didnt do the progress!

but any who you final is super sexy! i wish i had half the control you have over digital tools.


#59

Nice details and color, I love it, congratulations! good luck!


#60

Sang, you have truly out-done yourself, and your images have a high level of professional polish. Love your character and your colors. Good luck to you as well, sir! BigHuge represent!


#61

This is awesome, i’m speechless… I don’t know what to say more, i just love everything about your entry, concept sheet / modeling sheet / winning pose, they all are superb! :buttrock: 5 stars from me!


#62

YAY! Moore Girl Powers!!! Go on! And do some damage I really like this for the videogame! Great to see all your process of design and well balanced style!:thumbsup: