DWIII - 2D - emysfit - Klauzniffia

#10

I like the idea. Loved the movie constantine. I’m not sure if I can do the shockwave thing and keep the summons though. Since she’s a warlord summoner I think she has to kind of be non-magical, while her artifacts allow her to summon the stuff.

I’ve actually thought about changing her to have an elemental magic instead of the summons. Either ice or lightning probably. I could do the shockwave then. Could also concentrate on just her then. But at the same time I like the summons. So I’m not entirely sure where I’ll go with it.

I’m also thinking about giving a 3d entry a shot so I kinda don’t want to change her and maybe carry over the new ideas to that. Though my 3d skills are pretty subpar and I’d be using the free program ‘blender’ since I don’t have access to anything else anymore. So I’ll probably stick with the summons and try to keep my 3d entry simplistic.

#11

Nice start and you have an interesting character. I think that the length of the skirt just seems to “get in the way” but its nice. The beasts however seem a little generic but that’s just my opinion. I want see how she’ll turn out.

–Stacy

#12

I agree with the others; having dual shields is a neat idea. Are you planning on giving them different features or shapes? It might be interesting to see asymmetrical shields.

#13

I started playing Lineage 2 this week. It’s sucking my free time away! haha.

Stacy: you are definately right about the skirt. I’m working on a new overall design for her and this is one thing I’m going to try and change for sure. And the beasts are kind of generic but I’m really thinking about just doing an element or something instead of the summons so that’ll take care of that heh.

Swizzle: I honestly hadn’t thought of making them asymmetrical at all, but now that you mention that, it is really appealing to me. I think that’s another thing I’ll be focusing on in the next design. And if I choose an element instead of the summons I have some ideas for the shields to interact with one another that would be alot cooler probably with different shields.

Thanks for the suggestions and comments. Next post I’ll have something sketched up instead of just words…just gotta put away the lineage 2…

#14

Alright. I started trying to design shields for her. Personally I’m kind of leaning toward the void/darkness pair. But I’d really like some other’s opinions so please let me know what you think.

The top pair is Void/Darkness. The void shield holds a kind of black hole prison in which the circle things around it can basically suck anything into. The darkness shield is half alive with the demonic tenticles flailing around(kinda got the idea from the hellboy demons heh.) and she can channel dark energy through the bottom to kind of blast people.

The next is Ice/Water. The ice shield is kind of a normal shield but encased in ice to be even stronger plus emits a freezing energy that can freeze things…duh. The Water shield generates it’s own water, those are kinda like mini canals on it. She can force more water to the point of basically causing massive waterfalls out of the shield. Then she can freeze it!

The next is Air/Lightning. This is my least favorite… but the wind shield is basically constantly spinning blades so not only will she block with the shield but she’ll slice up anything coming at her too. The lightning shield is kind of offensive. if she throws a punch the segmented area flys out to a short distance basically extending her reach to about 8 feet and channels the lightning through the rods and such.

The final one is the summoning pair or just one. It’s basically the shield that I originaly designed. But I was thinking of doing away with the summons and giving her the other one as a kind of gargoylesque idea, where the little guy jumps off her shield and fights with her, and the normal shield is used to control him. I guess I could also just double the normal one still and let her summon other things too.

#15

Here is the redesign of the lowerbody. The little spiky things off the boots are more like an armor peice, shielding her thighs. The skirt is split now a back and front peice. I was also thinking about adding a cape(nothing too fancy but like shown.) Any feedback is appreciated. The plate thing over her crotch is also where I’ve decided to put the insignia. I didn’t really take the time to draw it out but you can kinda see it haha.

#16

Since nobody replied I think I’ll just go back to the original summoner idea. Not sure what I’m going to do for the shields exactly but I’ll be working on that soon.

I found an old graphire tablet that I bought years ago and decided to give it a go. This isn’t done yet but I think this is the summon I’m going to give her. It’s a cerberus like monster. It’s size is going to be pretty big, like she is about the size of one of it’s legs. It’s more reptilian than wolf and the three heads will each have a different attribute. I’m thinking the right head will have poison, the left breath fire, and I havn’t really thought of the middle one, but I like the void shield idea, so I might make it do that, like be able to suck anything into a black hole prison that I might put ont he belly area or something. I’m thinking of building up a saddle and giving it some armor as well so not only can it fight but it could double as a mount.

#17

I gave him a generic name. Saberus Ultima. I’ll color it tomorrow probably. Then back to the main character. I’m having fun with this tablet. I think I’m just going to leave him in this kind of primal state instead of the armor/saddle idea. I’ve also got an idea for the girl’s shields and the final image…if I can put it on ‘paper’ the way it is in my head.

#18

This is looking good! Sorry to not have commented on your thread earlier, as you were so kind as to add notes to mine… twice! Anyhow…

I love the creature! Especially this last rendering of him - he’s really coming together. You commented on his being more reptillian than wolf-like, and it might be fun to push that even more. You have time: Before you just settle on how he is now, maybe experiment with making him even more reptillian: More scales, more of the face shape of a lizard, flatter heads like a snake…? Remember, Google Image Search is your best friend for cases like these: Just search for “lizard” (or snake or whatever) and you can pretty quickly find a bunch of great pictures to give you new ideas. The more you borrow from real-world animal anatomy, the more it will make your creature seem more plausible.

As for the heads having different powers, I’m not so sure about that: The rules were pretty specific about not mixing powers: A character could have Void, or Light, or Summoning, but not mixes of the two. If she can summon a creature that has other powers… well, that’s skirting the rules along a pretty fine line. You might want to consider playing it safe and just have her with summoning powers. The beastie is pretty fearsome all by itself without needing magic as well.

As for the shields, I’m glad you chose summoning as that’s one of my favorite sield designs. I like the Darkness and Summoning shields because they’re not just plain shields, each incorporates some organic (or organic-looking) element, which is kind of unique, and worth exploring more. In facr, what if her armor incorporated similar elements? Like those tentacles on the Darkness shield, what if they were her shoulder pads?

Anyhow, just some ideas. Good luck with it all! And thanks again for your input!

-mike

#19

I read before at GA that “summoned creatures can use whatever natural talents they have. So if you summon a demon, it can use fire. If you someone a water elemental, it can use water”

Fred’s post here.

I remember this because somebody said something like this before - If I can only have one element for the whole thing, then the summoner will summon a creature that can summon another creature that also can summon … (since “summoning” is an element) :smiley: Though however, never encountered anybody asked about multiple elements in one summon. IMO if it’s the creature’s natural talents then it shouldn’t be interfering with the rules. Well you can ask at GA though.

Anyway, I also like the summoning shield and the reptilian choice for cerberus. Keep up the good work!

#20

hey man that’s coming along pretty good! i really like the whole cerberus lizard idea! keep it up!

#21

walrus, thanks for the suggestions! I was thinking about maybe making the heads more reptilian like you say then have long strands of hair coming through scaley like natural armor on the necks/back. I want it to be kind of reptilian but at the same time still be cerberus like with the wolf elements. I looked at some google lizard pics for refs but fell asleep before I did anything and now I have to go to work! yey…

xp-58, thanks for the explaination. I’ve been kind of wondering that.

dmightyone, thanks!

The way I was thinking of the summons having powers is that the rules say the artifact lets the character themselves use a power. So logically if you’re a summoner and you summon an ice monster, the ice monster has the power of ice, but you still have only the power to summon…just like I was kind of thinking it’d probably be allowable to have say…an earth mage summon an earth elemental because essentially they control earth so it’s earth magic making the elemental not summoning magic…not really officially worded like this but this is how I was going about it.

With that said…I’m actually thinking of not using the elemental like powers after all. Still will probably make them do stuff other than be a big powerful beast. Might keep the poison idea though, it being reptilian and all.

#22

So I drew her with the void/darkness shields because I’m still trying to get used to this tablet. I’ve never really used one but I’m getting the hang of it and really liking it.

I was actually thinking of maybe going void/darkness with these shields and the ideas mentioned above, but still keeping the beast, but making it smaller and putting a saddle on it as her mount. Since mounts are allowed.

i worked on the cerberus guy trying to make him more lizard like with snake heads but I really didn’t like it. I’ll probably go back to working on him more later but I wanted to break and draw her again since I havn’t done anything digitally with her yet. I might go ahead and color this one too so I can get down the color scheme. The insignia is going on her cape and croch.

#23

color scheme idea…not sure if it’ll change or not.

#24

This is the way i’ve decided to go. Beast is out. Darkness/void. I finished the wings(havn’t seen them since the first post heh, but they’re there!) And the shield design I changed a little, because I’m going to just double it. She still has the void prison on the shields and now they both can suck anything into them through the ‘mouth’.

I’m running out of time so I’ll probably go ahead and use what I’ve done now and start on the model sheets. I also already have the final illustration pose I think. I’ll probably update again within the next week…if i can get some time.

#25

Compiled all my relevant sketches into the Concept Sheet. It was more of a task than I thought it would be to get them all into a small area together without too much unwanted overlapping and such haha. I’ll probably work on the model sheet next. Deadline is coming up ><! Though history has shown they tend to extend it heh, but I don’t think it’s a good idea to rely on that.

#26


The model sheet so far. Front Back. Probably will do side view tomorrow. fitting onto a 1000x1000 sheet is going to be awkward so I’ll probably do something else to divide the sheet in fourths or do the side view and do the shield front/side views or something to put above the figures to even it out. I’ll prob update again tomorrow after work.

And a note on the wings…they flap quickly like a bees so she can fly, but they’re not very strong so she’s not exactly a distance flyer. Being a ‘fallen angel’ she has lost her angelic wing span. The bottom ones actually can be used as a weapon, by stabbing surprisingly with the pointed ends.

#27

I think this’ll be my final model sheet. Im not very good at making collages heh. But I think this covers it well enough. Has the 3 views and a side/front view of the shield, I’d think that’d be enough maybe. Wish it could be any size instead of 1000x1000. Would be much nicer to line the 3 figures side by side for a longer picture I think.

#28

Final Illustration - Used a FF: Advent Children screen shot as ref for background. I know the setting of the competition says no technology, but I was thinking and where the machine planet is, there probably would still be buildings and such that look of technological ages. Not random huts or something. I like how it turned out I think though I don’t think I have any kind of real chance against some of the other entries I’ve seen around haha.

#29

Hey man, congrats on finishing! I’d have to say my favorite part about this piece are the wings. They are a neat design, and I like how they curve around and frame the character.