DWIII - 2D - calyx - Aveolae

#41

Hmm, lots to choose from. i like the dark blue background better than the light tan - the former feels like you put in a dark background, while the latter feels like you didn’t get around to a background. And the dark colros set a ncie mood. Overall I like the top row best, before you got itno wild colors. The red on the far right pops really nicely against the blue.

The one comment I have about the figure is that the upper thighs and hips feel far too large for the rest of the body. They don’t necessarily need to be scaled down. I suspect that even just lengthening the midrift section, pulling the upper body away from the pelvis, would look really coola nd deemphasize the scale difference.

Anyhow, good luck!

#42

Uh… Alex Novo said this on my thread :

Alex Novo:There are max 1000x1000. so it mean that you can do 1000x700 or 700x1000, but not more then 1000px via both sides.

So im gonna still stick to my dimension(which is not square) ><

Good luck! I gtg now coz i need to meet Mr. Hing now lol…check back either later or tmrw. You take care and Good lucks!!..kk byes! *throws you a giant clover! Bai!

#43

OKay… Here’s a little update which i honestly am not very happy with. I’m starting to divert from my original idea. Worse still, i’m wondering why i chose this direction to begin with… But all in all, i joined the war to have fun and i did, and i would still like to get this done to the end!

What do you all think? Any feedback is appreciated!

#44

Walrus, thank you. Your comments were invalueble, all taken into account. I also went for the third on the top row as you mentioned, and worked my latest color (test) from that…though… argh. I’m feeling a little blinded now, gonna take a break.

#45

Mun, thanks again! For a while there i was thinking of the creatures we worked on for the FMV project… ): Kinda miss it. I wonder how are you all progressing?

Look for Mr.Fyreantz at toa too!

#46

i actually liked the cgs colors on your chick! the one with black hips and red legs.

but this ones cool too! more astral plain-E feeling.

i might ad some longer tenticals on the right to keep the s curves going!

and yeah! i go to academy :smiley: still waiting to take all the cool classes, just been doing ge’s and basics haha

#47

The pose is really beautiful, I really don’t know how people like you handle poses like this that just looks natural despite it’s somewhat complicated positioning. If you get what I mean. ;p You are a little too hard on yourself some times, I feel. Take it easy and seriously, worry less! Chiiilll. As for your original idea, I think you can still go back to them when you get the time to. :slight_smile: Not for this war, though. Perhaps get more prepared for the next war.

I don’t suppose this is done yet? I’m rather liking the background and those effects you have created for the background characters. A great addition to it because I kind of am getting the feel of how the character would actually be like if in a game/ movie. I would really like to see this gets more refined though, in the sense of materials and form. As well as the light direction and the like. I think the blue around her (background) can be toned down a little more so she don’t seems to blend into it… Either that or she can be a little more brighter, bring out the contrast ! :slight_smile:

#48

Oh my, got to get to the modeling sheet and concept art pages… Will refine this if i have the time…also wanted to try something. Thanks Flork and Hammy, i’ll be back for replies shortly!

Edit: I changed the bottom area a little…tweaking the flames a little. Will post later.

#49

I’ve submitted! Thank you for all the support and crits everyone!
On a note to self though: I’m proud i got it done, it doesn’t matter what happens next now :slight_smile:

To War, next year!

#50

Flork- Thanks for the comment, and yep, i did add a couple more tentacles. Went for the blue-red thing in the end :slight_smile: I’m hoping the fire pops now!

I’m from AAU too, what major are you in? :slight_smile: I’m a 3d-Game Arts major!

#51

Hammy, thank you! Yup i understand… though i believe it’s time to go back to my Max project lol. Do wanna chillll first alright!

The earlier wasn’t the final, just posted the final :slight_smile: I did keep in mind what you said from the beginning, wanted it to look like it’s in a scene…though i didn’t pull it off completely with time constrains. Did kick the values and colors and such…and my main focus at a point was to pull of that fire/lava inside her body. I sure hope it’s much better now… Though i definitely don’t want to get into a war with 5? 6? days left at hand like this again.

Thanks again!

#52

@_@ Your presentation skill + sketches all together… Beautiful. I’m gonna beat you into starting early next year so you don’t have any regrets on last minute work again. :expressionless: Regardless, YES you should be proud of yourself for finishing this in time. :slight_smile: And whatever happens next doesn’t matter, the fun of it is what does it. Though aim higher next time, you are only stepping into the water for now.

Best of luck! ^^/

#53

YAY we did it haha, im so glad its over hahah but im gonna miss havin something to do haha
i think offically im game arts major, but im gonna switch to illustration someday hahaha so iv been taking ill classes.

#54

Cool work, cool presentation, my congrats and good luck!

#55

Darn…guess i missed all the action. Mr. Faiyar Antsu? we meet him up quite often these days…for dinners and such…there was a night that me him and haozilla went out for dinner and we talked a lot about um…stuff. Tell you when i see you next month. KK back to DW…your entries are awesome(nothing new)…I love the presentation on your model and concept sheets…so cleeeaaannn… gosh. As for the final, im glad you made it(but) . Well done… Loving the colors, very hypnotic but i do think the skull thing that shes holding on her left arm is not quite clear… maybe it’s just me…but you know how i suck at giving comments and feedbacks so… Thumbs up!! :wink:

Really glad you made it…Really…woohoo.

#56

Yay! you made it , her power its so awesome! and the hues of light look great for fire! all her design add so much in her besides the color ( that’s great)! I really like it all ,and like you said the best part of this it’s to finish! :applause:

Thank’s for all the support! Congratulations and I wish for the best !:thumbsup:

#57

hampsty- thanks a lot…definitely would work twice as hard the next year, because i want to. I’m still shocked i joined at all this time with the time left… and yeah :slight_smile: Perhaps you’d join too?

Flork- Ah, really?! That is what i thought of doing too… but i still am not sure. Are you in the graduate or undergraduate program?

Alex Novo- thank you :slight_smile:

Rezeroth- Again, stop saying such things! >:( Your comment counts, and yeah i think so too…but i just didn’t want to make it stand out too much too. Time was a factor too, of course u_u Yeah, i’m very happy i got it done at all… i thought i’d be disappointing myself by not joining the War…but i actually made it to the end, and it is an incredible reward, that feeling of accomplishment :slight_smile: Though… i admit i would not have done this design as the final given more time, if i could turn back time.

AxelAlonso- Thank you. I tried really hard to push the fire idea, and i’m hoping it ‘pops’ a lot more now, to make her fire element obvious :slight_smile:

I wonder when will any hint of the results be announced!

#58

Calyx! its a job well done!! dont be so hard on yourself, im very sure time was a huge huge factor so just gettint it to the finish line is a big thing…I know what its like ;). Even like Bakat Baru…you know.LOL I know, you know its not your ultimate best coz we’ve seen you done stuff thats phenomenal… I have my reasons for saying that too, its not just a praise ;D… Anyway, this is very good already you know. *poke

#59

haha yeah im happyer! i get to draw in all the classes haha. im just a wee little undergrade :smiley:

#60

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