Hey folks! Really appreciate the support, thanks a lot!
here another update.
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Alcino
#122
great job so far. I just thought the position of the girl could be dynamised a bit and since it inspired me, i gave it a try. I realize it might be too late, but, anyways, here it is. Hope it can help. I did three more or less dynamic versions.
One last thing: even if you don’t have the time to redo the whole girl, at least try to redraw the feet the way I did, for, in your present illustration, they are drawn as if it was not a low-angle shot, though it is. Thus, it gives the impression that she’s falling backwards a bit, if you see what I mean.
In any case, best of luck for the contest 
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SirMitchell
#124
Hey Blood, really awesome work, I love everything so far.
Have you thought about putting the boomerang in the other hand? As you have it posed now, my brain went on auto mode and I thought it was a bow.
Also if you put it in the other hand, it will be more threatening, as should would be winding back to throw.
Regardless, it looks great.
RahMorais
#126
great man! alcino did a sketch (3rd) the girl has her right leg flexed! I think if you try to go in that way you could give much more sense of motion for her. just give it a try!
good luck
like bleached by sun… get on it! 
BloodTaster
#128
That’s all folks! The final pic. I’m not 100% happy with it, but was the best I could do in this last couple of days. Sometimes, the frustation was huge after painting and repainting some parts…almost give up. But it’s done. 
I wanna say thank you again, for all feedback and support, you guys are the best!
and good luck for us all!
The Story:
After her dog was killed by the machines, Kei Kei search for revenge. With a little help of an old shamman, the little girl was iniciate on the necromancy. In a ritual to build a magic artifact, she must give up one her eyes. Now, with that artifact she can bring the dog ( a monster version) to life and fight against the machines.
medunecer
#129
Just perfect. You did a great piece of game art design. And you wrote a perfectly fitting story. Congratulations!
nathanmckenna
#131
this is really cool, great ot see a child-like artifact wielder submitted so confidently.
your drawing style is really amazing too, i loved watching the development on this piece.
good luck mate!
The_Flork
#134
thats so tight! i wish i woulda made a summoner 
very cool! and good sence of character! you can just tell that there would be no dealing with her haha.
jramauri
#135
A great final man, congratulations! I hope you can stay among the top ten with this work. Model sheets and the action pose are pretty well executed. I still think her legs should be longer, as I said on the middle on your topic, anyway, she and her puppy look great.
Good luck and all the best!
OKMER
#137
Yap Vinicius!Congratz on finishing an amzing piece man!Yes indeed, you can be happy about it!!!
Because it simply rocks!
Loe the puppy idea.
Good luck to you buddy!
walrus
#138
Not just a dramatic camera angle and pose but dramatic colors as well. Very striking! Nice work, and congrats on finishing!
lallorona
#140
BLOODTASTER
are you young? Your character remands me of a video game character from Samurai Shodown called Cham Cham. I have a video game bissness and thats why I know all the characters on it.
I will like to see some thing really new, not translate it to your style.
Did you had a happy child life? because this character dont looks like that. Think on young generations, a very good young generations, happy young generations.