DWIII - 2D - "Axel Alonso - "Elemental"

#80

well that’s not quite what i meant, my point was that she was so horizontal you could turn the whole image and it could look like a good composition (it looks good but you better take whatever direction you prefer). I say use the original orientation, just rotate the witch a bit so she’ll look more like your first color sketch of the composition, and so her head doesent look like going in a downward direction.
This is a mess… I hope you can understand smenthing from all this babble… it’s really late now…

I’m sleepy.

#81

Jorge- Thanks I did the blur thing it tottaly works Thanks so much for all the feed back helps so much! Your character it’s looking GREAT! :applause:

Gabriel- I am sorry I didn’t have caffe this morning so I just didn;t get the point, I think this next post will explain better if that’s alright ? THANK YOU!:smiley:

WARRR GRRR!:twisted:

#82

SO :p…I changed the entire robot’s concept, looking at her from her back and front side, since she can see them all! , and also I flip her to get a better wide body view, I hope this works best…also the bridge in the bg I think works good for the focal point in her, and I don’t know if I should do so many light sources out from the eyes of her armour? What you guys think?:shrug:

the darn colors look a bit to saturated in this file…:curious:

#83

And yet somehow you got the idea :D:D:D this one looks great. Go for it buddy!

I would suggest that you pont the two main ‘eye bems’ (the ones right above her human eyes) in a similar direction, right now one is pointing up and the other pointing down.

Good luck in the final days!!

#84

Wow, what can I say, she’s hot! Sure to capture the judges attention. Nice concept too. :applause:

#85

Thanks For the feed back! I have to say I always read twice or more untill I get the whole message, when ever I don’t understand well the point!:argh:

Well Oreshia its 80% done I must do 1 day more I think and Iam dome the rotation I think I will post it in the late night! …This is fun! so much color I kinda miss it with all those gray values! hahaha:lightbulb:cool:

#86

GUAU GUAU GUAU
WOW WOW WOW :bowdown:

YOUR CHARACTER AXEL IS EXACTLY WHAT I EXPECT from you
GODDESS
SOBERVIUS
QUEEN OF OCEANS
I SAW YOUR PAPPER COMPETITION ON THE OTHER LINK DEVIANT ART…AND AGAIN WOW
YOU ARE TREMENDOUS tremendous my friend…a really talent…:bowdown::arteest:
AXEL YOU DRAW LIKE THE GOD ZEUS, THE CREATOR OF ALL THE GODDESS …with expectation I am waiting the final.
The textures the colors the design is WOW…I cant find another better word than this…
WOW WOW WOW, THE BACKROUND IS SPECIAL TOO AND THE MECHANICAL ROBOTS ARE JUST LIKE THE ONES FROM :argh: THE ENEMY´S COMPETITION …HAHAHA…GOOD IDEA…
2 MORE DAYS MMMMM mmmmm I REALLY HOPE YOU WIN you are special men…the only think you can draw is the magnificence,very difficult to find…some one like you…:thumbsup:
my honor…thanks… :wavey:

#87

Hi again, and thanks for the support! :slight_smile:
Wow 80% done… i really need to gear up 10x yikes!

On your last post, i think you can blur off or make the foreground creature less detailed so that Oreshia remains the focal point. By that i meant maybe you could lower the contrast, desaturate it, or something of the sort?

Keep the progress up!!

#88

HI Thanks so much for the support! The Feedback and the watch! :love:

:shrug: The Modeling Sheet-----Couldn’t finish it as I wish…o well was fun to have so fun in the paper design

And The concept! I have more :smiley: they just dont fitt there hahaha!

THANK YOU!:wink:

#89

Nice job there! She’s definitely one of the sexy babes in our team. Good luck!

#90

great job !

Best of luck.
-claudiu

#91

I had been looking the entire contestant’s work, and my favourite is you definitely.

Very good art design Axel

The render of your skin tones, were achieved very nice, it is difficult to paint so many details and textures, bur you have done this excellent as well. I like how the light is coming and love specially the jelly fish on her legs. All the personality of her design it’s aquatic and yet mystical. I think you feel very comfortable in this style, and it does as I said before, pops out from the rest.

I will be waiting to see more your work.

#92

This is a strong entry. Well done and good luck.

#93

I didnt manage to see your work the first time, there’s problem with the internet, but wow! im amazed, the concept is very unique, the turnabout and draft are well executed as well, congrats man!

#94

Expect from you, not lees YOU ARE THE BEST really superlative.:bowdown:

Clear and expressive colors, unlighted , back round soft and deep and clear. And about

ORESHIA is a goddess warrior created to win. So many elegant and graceful details on her costume WOW, so many time drawing ¡ haaa !. The concepts are excellent too, clear without damage.

When I see her, I thought in definitive power, true power to live and to take somebody to another way to live or died, but with grace with elegance. Like a Goddess.

Excellent work Axel, you are a really CONCEPT ART DESIGNER, you know how to created forms and worlds and ways to live SUPERB.:bowdown:

#95

Sweet dude! congrats! its good to see there is some one protecting our oceans haha

#96

Wow this really ended up looking awesome gotta tell you I really had my doubts about her being so colorfull but it looks great congratulations man sorry if I didn’t had time to post more often in your thread as you posted in mine good luck…
y que viva Mexico!

#97

Hey Axel, great work my friend!! love your concept and design, really cool. I really nice to see all the evolution on your concept, great!! Your final image is nice and magic, I allways love the “subacuatic” scenes :smiley: and this is really nice! Oreshia, looks great and powerful. A really honor to share this challenge with you, my friend! :slight_smile: Time for cold beers!! yeaaaaa!!! and Tequila !! yeaaaaaaaaaaa!! Cheers Axel!! :beer:

#98

Hey, thanx for your comment in my thread, here i am in return :beer: .

Most of all i loved her head on picture - desig on head and features. It looks somehow mighty, merciless and calm, but elegant in the same time…

Wish you good luck in judging! :slight_smile:

#99

Amazing! The final Oreshia is beautiful! (and a bit scary with those 2 eyeballs in her hands):eek:
Menacing yet beautiful, I like!