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[img]http://3d-wip.org/img/cgtalk/DWIII/2D/final_800.jpg[/img]DWIII - 2D - Agostinuke - Don't
Name: Donāt
Last Name: Know Yet
Race: Human changed to something else by a drunk sorcerer.
Class: Warlord
Artifact weapon: 2 magic holy curved razorblades. Indestructible.Can shoot powerful curved holy foton energy rays. The rays can cut through everything on their path (unless protected by magic as powerful).
The story:
Mr. Know Yet was drinking quitely in a bar near the docks when all of sudden an old man started yelling and ranting something about politics in Italy or something like that, so Donāt decided to finish his beer and exit the place. He was there to relax after an hard day at the plutonios mine; he didnāt have enough energy to absorb all that crapā¦he said to himself: āhong fook!ā and started to laugh when he heard a ābam!ā behindā¦he turned and saw the old man with red, almost burning, eyes staring at himā¦Donāt didnāt have time to say āAā or āBā that the old man launched at him a turbulence of exploding shining bright and magic rays which trasformed the poor Donātās head from human to eagle with a soundly āFLUFFā!
After that, the old man went back inside the bar and left our poor friend on his kneels.
Well, to make it extremely short, after a few years and adventures our dear Donāt became a powerfull warrior. He used his new acquired new enhanced senses for the good of human beings and some time later a good fairy gave him as reward for a night of fights 2 magic curved razorblades which he used from that moment to cut everything bad in the universe.
Me no speak english me want to put here work in progrez becoz I can feel inside your comuniti
Good evening.
Crap the hawk is hulk nowā¦
I liked more the one in wip n. 02ā¦must go back a little nowā¦
Iām leaving aside for a while the 3D ass man because Iām starting to like this one. Working on itā¦
nendo_3d
#9
overall i like the design but i donāt think the head matches the body. as in it looks abit to small. the width of the head seems fine. its more of the hieght of the head. seems to small for the bulkiness of the neck
RaresH
#10
I would be careful about taking the design to a finished look so early in your design stage. I think you need to explore many more designs before you try and paint a finished piece. Remember he needs to convince everyone that this guy can beat the machinists and hold his own against everyone else. More thumbnails and look at game art design in general. Just make it look real cool.
TheBloodyAlien
#11
Nendo and Raresā¦Thanks for your comments!!!
Nendo, you are right the neck is too bulk, I fixed it a little bit and probably Iāll change it even more later onā¦
About the head height, well itās an eagle head, eagle have that kind of head and neck. I want it to be an eagle head/neck, not an human eaglized 
Rares, I perfectly know what u mean, but Iām quite satisfied with this guy here, I see already the semi destroyed and colorful pants heās wearing, the weapons, masses and the ruins and stuffs all around, I want them here and Iāll try to develope them. Iām trying to give it life as a painting, doing my best to render a particular kind of light and atmosphere. If it will turn out as a shit, Iāll try to paint something else starting maybe with more roughs as u said. But for the moment, this eagle guy here really wants to show himself this way. Heās a delerict transformed and pushed to be a warrior, heās in danger, heās in a really bad situation and positionā¦heās not even good at hiding his shadow and probably someone else is going to ambush him, but his got claws and strength ffs
TheBloodyAlien
#15
another little stepā¦ an experiment with light anticipating some effect with the artifact weapon. Also I tried to get rid of the brownish color that was starting to bothering me.
a little step a time
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