Dominance War II: RedFish


#1

Hello everyone, I have decided to enter Dominance war II for cgsociety, don’t know how well I will do working full time, but a concept artist who is a friend of mine was nice enough to concept out the character for me, so I will give it my best shot

Here is the concept

and here is what I have so far. I just was able to devote the weekend to it so far, but I will keep plugging away on the high res until its done, hopefully by next weekend.

Crits and comments are more then welcome, please let me know what you guys think.


#2

good luck !


#3

I’m gonna be following this one - great work so far!

Good luck!


#4

Good luck dude - nice work so far! I’m rootin for ya.


#5

Just amazing sketch and modeling!! Im anxiety for the highpoly one!!
cya


#6

very impressive, can’t wait to see more!


#7

hey redfish, i really like the concept you have there. and the model looks like its coming along quickly. it looks really good and i can’t wait to see it finished. i’ll be checking up on this one (like most others will too). keep up the good work.:slight_smile:


#8

Amazing start, I’ll be following this one closely :eek:


#9

Impressive :buttrock:! I like this character, you got what it takes to win the WAR :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:


#10

nice concept. 1 thing though, i think the rules mentioned we cant have tech fused into flesh, might wanna read the fineprint before you start modeling!
but again i really like it sorry to be a downer :smiley:


#11

excellent work so far, one thing i can see though is that the legs you’ve modeled aren’t the same as the ones in the concept, personally i think the concept ones are more interesting both visually and for the character than the human legs that you’ve modeled, is there a particular reason you changed them?

as for tech fused into flesh, a small amount is permitted, it’s mention in one of the dominance war Q & A threads, something like, a hand is fine but not a whole arm, althhough i see an alien in armour holding a gun and not a cyborg alien, so maybe Gkain is seeing something i’m not.

good luck in the war:thumbsup:


#12

Hey nicely done, slick concept and really nice looking model. You work fast, Good Luck!


#13

waow really cool concept RedFish!
Looking forward to see your progress :bounce:


#14

Hey guys thanks for your replies and crits so far, I have started on the back and got enough to where I feel I can post, its still a wip, but crits are welcome
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Gkaine, he is in a suit, the tech is not supposed to be fused into his flesh, there are holes in the suit for the arms to come out, I hope that this is more clear on the final model.

ScudzAlmighty, I tried to make the legs match the concept more, I hope this update is more what you were thinking,

Thanks everyone for your replies, keep them coming and good luck to everyone else who is entering.


#15

hey redfish!

very nice execution of the model. both concept and 3d-wise.
i’m really liking the face and color-scheme.

-r


#16

this is spot-on to your concept

looks great

:thumbsup:


#17

i guess it’s more of what i was thinking, except of course that it’s a back view and you can’t see them:shrug:

sweet update though


#18

looking pretty sweet


#19

absolutely great concept and modeling Redfish!!! looking forward to see updates!


#20

Awesome man. my only suggestion is that you can optimize a lot of places and use those polies for somewhere else. For example, the ribbons can probably be cut down into one strip of polies instead of two.