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Hello Aritra,

I’ve fixed the embed links in your post. You were directly linking to your entire portfolio, instead of individual images. In general your work establishes a nice mood but what you lack is using the lighting for focal point direction. The viewer basically doesn’t know what to look at. Try to figure out what you want us to look at first, second and third. Then manipulate your composition, framing and lighting so that you can lead us into and through your image.

Best Wishes,