It is great, it is subtle but I think it really improve the lips.
Can I ask you how did you proceed to sharpen these wrinkles? Are you only using the material you extracted from your scan and photo shoot or did you use some external material?
If you allow me an other observation, it is about the little wrinkles under his eyes, and the little wrinkles in general. Not the fine wrinkles that are all over the face but the expression wrinkles that start to grow. You can see them under the eyes or on the forehead.
I think they are not enough present at the moment.
What I was wondering is if the darker coloration is produce by the light or if the friction of the skin at these areas change the pigmentation of the skin.
If that’s light that produce shadow at a micro level it should be driven by displacement and your skin shader. If it is skin pigmentation it should also be present on your color maps.
Do you know the answer? I tried to find something about it on many research paper with no luck.
I’m nitpicking but I am really interested in realistic faces and your work is the most impressive I’ve seen (yeah I already said that ;)).
Just to let you know that I trully respect your work and my crits are here to try to help you and myself at the same time as I’m not considering myself as an expert :p.