Critique Please - Character Design

#1

Hello guys,

Here’s another one – this one is for potential 3d sculpt.

What can I do to improve this one?

Also, from another set of critiques – I got that I should do something like this:

Thank you!

#2

It feels very top heavy, almost that the weight wouldn’t be supported by those legs, so maybe beef them up a little more.

#3

Hey there,

I like how you’ve kept all the complicated mechanical patterns around his body to be varied, but not too varied. It makes for a fun background villain.

The only thing I would recommend is for you to continue working on your figure drawing skills. A stronger understanding of the natural composition of shapes and gestures would greatly enhance this design.

Good luck!

#4

You should explain to us in what context we’re to assess your character design. Who is this character? What’s his purpose? What is the premise of the story? What were you aiming for and in what ways do you thing you’ve failed, and in what ways do you think you’ve succeeded?

#5

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