Just looking for some constructive feedback on this animation exercise I did for class.
Thank you!
Critique Please- Animation Flour Bag Assignment
jmeret0027
#1
PTG3
#2
The animation looks pretty good but i think you should try and thin out the fog it makes it a little hard to see your characters as the camera pulls away, and the fog looks like it should be extending farther off the edges of the platform looks too inconsistent with it being so think on the platform but there being none around it.
robomojo
#3
the sack is feeling a bit wooden. i would start with some anticipation/reaction before he jumps (squash down then stretch out) and same treatment in reverse when he lands.
Bossspider
#4
When it first starts, i wouldn’t shake the camera right away. And there’s no clue as to why the sack is breathing so hard. It just starts and the sack’s waving around madly. Get that guy to waddle into the scene, then breathe.
Also the camera moves along with the shakes it a little much. I’d simplify the camera move and considered how a real camera would move around this scene if it were a real set, so just tracking the Sack man on one side of this cliff for instance instead of doing a barrel roll over the pit. It just has a lot of unnecessary movement as of now.
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