Creature Critique

#1

Hi all,
I am a graduating student in animation and I was hoping to get some critiques on one of my latest animations. It was a simple creature walk for a character animation class and I wanted some further advice on what i could fix to make it stronger. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

http://www.vimeo.com/16946416

#2

It’s already pretty good,
Maybe you should work you curves, for exemple the motion on the back legs knees could do with more holdings, so far they sometimes move in a computer constant motion. in the first half of the shot.

hope it makes sense !

6ril.

#3

Looks cool!

Only thing I see is a few static moments in the hips… and for some reason the whole rig rises and lowers for no apparent reason at a few spots… as the previous fellow said I would take a look at the curves.

#4

As one foot is beginning to plant, bring up another. That’ll create a better fluidity in the steps. The start and stop is unappealing in my opinion.

#5

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