Concept for 3D (woman yes)...Need Pointers I Guess...

#41

Ok, I think I fixed it all now…

Adjusted shoulders and hips… :slight_smile:

#42

jm,

Coolness! It’s hard for me to see the specific differences without overlapping them, so give me a bit o’ time and I’ll jimmie up a comparison… :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#43

Ok, thanks a lot Rebecca!!! You’re a great help to me. :smiley:

Oh I’ll put up the reference I found for the adjustements I made… Upper body isn’t that strong, but the lower body’s fine. I shoud maybe fine tune the legs too, not really sure. Any idea’s.

I’m not copying this ref… just in case. :slight_smile:

#44

jm,

Ok, here is the tiniest of reviews…it’s totally a judgement call on your part, and, as always, just a suggestion: :slight_smile:

[left]~Rebeccak
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#45

JPGS just in case… :slight_smile:

[left]Hope this helps! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak
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#46

Thanks rebecca! I think I see your point. :smiley:

But could you elaborate a bit on which part seems off, or is it the lower body in general?

#47

jm,

I think her buttocks were still too big relative to her upper torso/rib cage, and her legs looked a bit longish also ~ so basically all I did was to shrink her buttocks and legs slightly to try to bring them more in line proportionally to the rest of her body. Like I say, it’s a judgement call, and you’re free to take this with a grain of salt. :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#48

Ok thanks!

I’ll have a go at it, I don’t think the hips are a big issue allthough not too athletic, it’s nice to see. (as long as she doesn’t look like the wrong kind of nuclear baby)

Thanks again. :smiley: Great stuff.

#49

jm,

No prob! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#50

The elbows in the front view need some adjustment.

Right now you flare the forearms out symmetrically at the elbow. This gives the forearm a wooden mannequinn aspect.

You should flare the inner part of the elbow pretty much where it is. A bunch of flexors originate at the medial epicondyle of the humerus.

HOWEVER…

http://www.daanspanjersberg.nl/site/16632/spiergroepen/photo25.jpg

You should push the outer flare of the forearm UP so that it is ABOVE the elbow. Muscles like the brachioradialis originate above the epicondyles, actually on the humerus itself.

It looks like you’ve eased this correction into the latest drawings without mentioning it, but you are doing it more with one arm than with the other. I’d suggest ghosting in an axis where you think the elbow bend actually would occur, and make sure the muscle masses sit outside/high inside/low with respect to that axis.

#51

jfrancis,

Great comments!! :thumbsup: Thanks for these thoughts! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#52

Thanks jfrancis.

I was aware of it but was thinking it would be easier to solve in the sideview. From here it would bea lot fidgetting but maybe I’ll just fix it enough to look ok with your comments, the more the better! :slight_smile:

Thanks. :thumbsup:

edit: Thanx for the great pic… I’m heading to scavenge the sit e right now , lol. :smiley:

#53

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